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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Lovely update Saku my dear! As I have said many times I so admire your ability to create an entirely imaginative and totally different plot out from the very basic ingredients only of the basic concept of the show. You do the twists so well and the characters are portrayed so, hmmm, stylishly is the word I think I am looking for. Such nice bits here- a lot of your writing is reminiscent of an Oriental feel. I think its the anime/ manga love?! The flower seller here for instance- makes the whole story somewhat exotic.
I liked quite a few lines a lot- the poisoning the elixir was one such and then:"She had become my bliss when I realized I was her agony." really appealed to me.
Laksh you fairly warned is Laksh and so is Ragini- both vile! š”Can't wait to read more as ever. Thanks for a lovely update xx
Shru, dearestš³
@ bold, how did you guess that?š² Yes it is true to a certain length I like the oriental aura around my works. Glad you found it appealing, and the lines I spent a lot of thinking over them, you just made my day by parsing them.
I'll update soonš
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