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Jwala

@LoveSriNal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

superb dear.. poor swara.. she can't remember even sanskar.. ragini is as usual. . something going on in her mind.. lakshji ke bare meim kya kahoon? such a pathetic guy.. very interesting. . continue soon ..

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Thanks for the PM. Loved it.

I really like the way you made Swara lose her memory. Eventhough it pains me to know she forgot Sanskaar. I am so freaking glad that she forgot her one true love Lakshya. Atleast here she will look at him as her brother In law and not BFF or sister husband.

That what I love the most about it. Also Ragini is not her sister. Great to know. I liked Ragini when her games brought Swasan together now it causing a MU I am not liking her that much. So atleast in this story we won't get Swara pining for Ragini happiness.

I can't wait for your next update . Waiting for your PM.

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Intresting...
Continue soon..

Thank you dear😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: foresight
really amazing as always...wondering how it got to divorce in the first place though...it felt as though she loved Sanky as well and would choose to be with him after that letter

Dear I think you are a little confused. This is not a sequel to Snow queen, but en entirely different story. I have completed the winter series with SQ, they had the happy ending there.

Thanks a lot😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: manasie23
Yaaay do you know kitni shridhat we I was waiting for your update.. I visited this thread at least 5 times yesterday...
This update is so well written and planned I absolutely adore the way you have written it...😳
Swara's confusion, Sanskaar's pain everything was 👏
And RagYa can I just bitch-slap them both... They irritate the crap out of me... 🤢

I know I know, that's why I PM you Manasi😆

Thanks dear, I'm so glad you liked the start, it's soon get very very intense

I have a lot of RagYa coming up, they sort of made SwaSan happen, so you'll have to tolerate them I'm afraid😳

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Sakura...u r just tooo good. Thr i was bemoaning the end of Ice king n snow queen n u give us elixir...such a tantalising start...cant wait fr the story to unfold!!!

I told you not to cry and have some elixir😉

Thanks dear😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: anjaan210
i love u sakura... !!!
cnt wait for the nxt update..

Do you?😳 Thanks!

I'll update soon😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: medhasankar
What on earth?? Even now, this guy is thinking of competing for her love??
So we are back in that memory loss page...sigh, with swara the victim.

and poor sanskaar.:(((( Chalo waiting for ur twist.

I loved the initial meet with Shai. How well that was described Saku...amazing. Her hands see more than her eyes." I have made many love stories..and lived yours the most..."

Wow.

Continue soon.

Medha darling🤗

Told you at the start, Lakshya will be his wonderful self🤢 That was a warning.

My heart goes out to him as well.

Oh...You love Shai, hmm then wait for the twist, anyway I love Shai too, she's my nail here, I'm hanging on her to make SwaSan work and help Sanskar get over his pain.

I'll continue soon😊

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Dear I think you are a little confused. This is not a sequel to Snow queen, but en entirely different story. I have completed the winter series with SQ, they had the happy ending there.
Thanks a lot😊

ahhh...thanks

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: piccola1
Great beginning, this sounds good..! 👏Angst, definitely..and lots of venom as well. 😛
Cant wait to see a tough Sanskaar handling the evil of Ragz..Like u said, Lakshya remains his awful, slinky self. No redemption for him...
Love the entire idea of Shai..and his bond with her. 😊

Looking forward to this one!😃

Hi Pic🤗

Thanks dear. Yes Sanskar and Ragini will go head to head here and yes Lakshya will remain🤢

I'm glad you love Shai, then you're going to love the twist too.

I'll update soon😃