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Swathy

@SwathyS

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

So DP hired swara to keep eye on sanskar..

Update soon dear.

So what happened with between swa san dis they have an office romance

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Very well written Saku...
DurgaPrasad Maheshwari I dont know if he is bad in this one or not but he just took the first in uniting SwaSan dint he?!
And Lakshya and Ragini I still dont understand them both
And Swara-Sanskaar I hope as Sanskaar said they will be fine...

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: ketty84
very nice kick start i want see swasan togather and their blooming romance

Thanks dear.

You'll see them together soon😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Kushimian89
wow!👏
amazing update

Thanks😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Res 😊 will comment in detail from lappy later.

Un-res

Very interesting start, Saku. DP's machinations to control/ influence/ keep an eye on Sanskaar are positively Mahabharata like (Dhritarashtra against the Pandavas? Bhishma against Karna?) Quite different from the DP on the show, who is (thankfully)!! very affectionate towards Sansku.

Liked the Lion analogy BTW. That's from our shared passion for NGC/ Animal Planet/ Discovery channels, I guess. 😊

So this is the connection between Ragini and Swara. Wonder how Lakshya comes in. Will he be impulsive and weak kneed as usual, to fall for his cousin's PA, even while courting Ragini? Man, will that guy never change?

I liked how you've tweaked almost all the characters here. Waiting to read more in the next chapter.

Hi Viji🤗

Yes, I had to get a rather hasty start otherwise I'll make a lengthy story. DP is gray shaded here, not as warm as he is in the show but not entirely dark either. I hope I'd be able to balance him on the edge of the good side.

Ahh.. @ bold🤗 For calling it our shared passion. Yes, I picked that up from NGC, kind of love lions.

Lakshya's angle is slightly different here, he's not as...what would you call it...hmm...naive, as he was in the show. No Viji that guy won't change.🤢

I'll update soon.

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...
Wow Sakura..

a great start followed by equally worthy episode.
i said episode? well coz it felt that real.. as if i am watching a live show.

Bravo buddy.
very very intriguing. looks like darker version of good old Mills and boons that i loved.
bring it on.

p.s love the little mahabharat reference there.
i always thought of DP as Bhisma and Sanskaar as Karn for some reason.

good luck with the further episodes Saku.
(hope you don't mind me calling you that).

p.s. again. no one sends me pm. but me being the professional stalker that i am always manage to track down your works.😆.
showie couldn't comment upon the mind blowing Ice king and equally amazing Snow queen.
those works were novel-esque. ⭐️

Hey Nimmi🤗

Spotted elixir have you? Thanks dear, for finding it interesting. Hmm, I feel that Mahabharata angle strongly in SR, but the show never presses upon it.

@ bold, no I don't mind😳

@ P.P.S: You want PM? 😲 You should have said something about that. I'll PM you next time. But you do better stalking yourself I guess😆

About IK and SQ, write something on those threads if you have time, the royal couple is greedy for comments.😉

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: swa291
So DP hired swara to keep eye on sanskar..
Update soon dear.

So what happened with between swa san dis they have an office romance

Hmm yes, sort of. Not entirely office romance, you'll see.

I'll continue soon😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: manasie23
Very well written Saku...
DurgaPrasad Maheshwari I dont know if he is bad in this one or not but he just took the first in uniting SwaSan dint he?!
And Lakshya and Ragini I still dont understand them both
And Swara-Sanskaar I hope as Sanskaar said they will be fine...

Hi Manasi,

Thanks dear😊

No no he is not bad He is gray shaded but not a bad guy. I love DP, can't tolerate him dark shaded.

You'll understand them soon.

Yes, trust Sanskar😳