hey dear!!!! your new reader here. 😊 err!!! rhyming naaa!! kabki kabhi ho jaati hai galti se.. 😆
you are one of the best writers I have come across on IF. Very talented , a different style of writing, so fluent with words, I wish even a little bit ability of expressing so I can tell you how awesome you are, the appreciation you deserve and yeah, also don't find our Swasan's conversation and expressive moments in serial so "jyaadaa senti ho gaya type". 😛
ok, coming to point...I have started to read your story from the very first day when you posted, but still couldn't gather the apt words and courage to post reply in your praises *sorry* . in my opinion good stories like yours do not deserve just one word( sorry if I hurted anyone, don't take me wrong, I seriously understand your situation 😆 ) when you wrote a long , meaningful , chapters with full of emotions. and that is why I still owe a comment on Viji's OS. 😛 😳
well, now can't resist myself from telling you that your combination of poison and elixir is quite alluring. just love the connection of love , unsaid understanding between Swasan especially their ability of understanding of each other without a word said, so intense and passionate as I am seriously a fan of sanely intense love and it's story. you have woven the story so well, chapter by chapter more intriguing, more interest capturing .
in the end , I would like to say ,keep showering your wonderful pieces of writing on us and bear my inexpressive comments now onwards. 😉 🤗
Edited by TRPS - 9 years ago
