Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 23

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good..

Originally posted by: harshsriti

superb update saku.. I have major confusion regarding laksh.. ragini was his love? then he used swara to act in front of sanskar? I have this doubt. . continue soon.. I'm loving the story

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Wonderful...read the 5 chapters at one go...loving the story.

Originally posted by: -Jamina

Thank you for this wonderful update 😊

beautiful ...loved the swasan moment.

Originally posted by: Asyalover

i really loved the last scene of swasan and sanskar's dialogue

Originally posted by: ketty84

I just love the concept. Swara n sanskaar chemistry sizzle as sanskaar still concerned about her. Whatever in poision exilir cured it because swara is right sanky still loves her.

Update soon

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Thanks for the PM.

I absolutely loved it, how can you make every conversations so interesting and how i wish the last scene never ended. when i saw your last lines i was disappointed it was over for now.

Do update soon.. Waiting

Also i like everything about the way you write . It has becoming one of main reasons to visit the forum to check for a PM from you .

Originally posted by: foresight

beautiful ...loved the swasan moment.

adarsh is turning out to be more like shakuni in this one. wondering if sanskar already knows about laksh and ragz and with counter adarsh's pawn with his own (rags) who will then go out of control

looking forward to the next update

Hi, I recently visited this forum. Mostly I am a silent reader. But couldn't help myself from commenting though. Wish that you would write the entire story in one go and I could read it in one go. It is absolutely amazing and I am completely hooked. what a wonderful piece of writing. Great job please keep it up and continue soon. the wait is absolutely killing !!