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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Loved the last two updates! What exactly did Lakshya and Swara did to Sanskaar? Can you please make it so that Lakshya gets a slap or preferably atleast a dozen slaps?

I am so glad that Swar a seems to have fallen for her husband. Loved the contrast you showed with regards to her emotions and feelings toward both Lalshya and Sanskaar.

I especially loved the last bit with the hug!

Looking forward to the next update!

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Awesome..

Both the past and present scene are lovely..

Still very confused of what would have happen that led to swara accident???

Continue soon..

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit
Sakura 🤗 I just cant wait for the next update!! End of each chapter leaves me wanting for more.
I love the switch between the past and the present. The past was the poison in their life. They are now soothing it with Elixir in the present.

Swara may not remember Sanskaar, but she knows from the sense of security his touch infuses that he would never hurt her. At the same time, even if she didnt know anyrhing about Laksh, yet she feels uncomfortable with his touch. I loved how you brought out the effects of Laksh and Sanskaar's touch on Swara.

Awww😳🤗 Thanks dear😊

Yes the past is poison that is slowly diluted by the elixir of present. Sometimes even if you forget every thing of your factual life, strong emotions leaves a trace behind😊

I'll update soon😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: manasie23

You know you confused me even more than I already am right?! 😆

Did I? 😆

I thought I almost spilled it out. But thanks for assuring me you understood nothing! Ahh what a relief!😆

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Loved the last two updates! What exactly did Lakshya and Swara did to Sanskaar? Can you please make it so that Lakshya gets a slap or preferably atleast a dozen slaps?
I am so glad that Swar a seems to have fallen for her husband. Loved the contrast you showed with regards to her emotions and feelings toward both Lalshya and Sanskaar.
I especially loved the last bit with the hug!
Looking forward to the next update!

Thanks dear!

You'll know what happened soon. And yes, Lakshya will get slapped very very soon. I'm glad you loved the hug! I'll update soon😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Awesome..
Both the past and present scene are lovely..

Still very confused of what would have happen that led to swara accident???

Continue soon..

Thanks dear😊

You'll know about the accident with the future updates. there are more things to reveal just at the moment. I'll update soon😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Res 😊

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I love the way you explore the dualities of life in your works, Saku. Angels versus Demons (which I think you touched upon in Ice King, too). Poison versus Elixir. Sanskaar, in the past, thinking that it would be easier for him to condemn himself to a demoniac existence, suffocating his heart, living in bitterness and hate, and taking recourse to dulling his pain momentarily with poison he actually loathes...And the way he thinks that elixir is forever beyond his reach, for he does not have the capacity to become an angel, suffocate his soul, take more pain without retaliation...a very, very moving portrayal.

Loved the Swara--Sanskaar interaction in the present, the way she reads his eyes, and the firm, yet tenderly gentle way he reassures her that she was in no way unfaithful to him in the past. I really liked the way you have maintained the flow in this SS.

Already looking forward to the next update---if there is one thing I would want you to change, it is the length of your updates--I always thirst for longer ones from you! 😉

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago