Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 22

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

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I love the way you explore the dualities of life in your works, Saku. Angels versus Demons (which I think you touched upon in Ice King, too). Poison versus Elixir. Sanskaar, in the past, thinking that it would be easier for him to condemn himself to a demoniac existence, suffocating his heart, living in bitterness and hate, and taking recourse to dulling his pain momentarily with poison he actually loathes...And the way he thinks that elixir is forever beyond his reach, for he does not have the capacity to become an angel, suffocate his soul, take more pain without retaliation...a very, very moving portrayal.

Loved the Swara--Sanskaar interaction in the present, the way she reads his eyes, and the firm, yet tenderly gentle way he reassures her that she was in no way unfaithful to him in the past. I really liked the way you have maintained the flow in this SS.

Already looking forward to the next update---if there is one thing I would want you to change, it is the length of your updates--I always thirst for longer ones from you! 😉

Originally posted by: swa291

i want you to write write and do nothing else.

Keep writing

Originally posted by: ..Amaira..

amazing thamks for the wonderful updates

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Awesome...

Swara is in immense pain as she has lost her memory...

Loved the way how sanskar handle Swara..

Thank you for the PM..

Continue soon..

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Sakura 🤗 Wonderful update!!

Laksh is being stupid and self centered as usual. Adarsh is trying to add fuel to the anger within Sanskaar while DP is trying to rein in the angry beast. Its interesting.

I always wanted to see Sanskaar talk to Swara about Kavita. She was an important aspect of his life and he loved her a lot. I wanted him to share his memories of Kavita and grieve for her, while swara consoled him. In the show he was blinded by hate and amidst all the hate and anger he never had a chance to reflect and grieve for Kavita. I am going to take the little scene in which he talks to swara about love as indication for a Kavita- centric convo.

And I can't help but do as they say. They reflect me better than any mirror ever had, that I almost believe I am the most beautiful you've ever set your eyes upon. They tell me so. That I matter more than anything else... But they don't go beyond that. Because they are in pain... I pained them, they are afraid of me, of wounds I have given.'

^^ Loved these lines

Originally posted by: Shikha022

wow !!
amazing update !!
loved it !!

Originally posted by: manasie23

Saku you can never disappoint😆

First of all I commend you for giving us one update everyday... it makes my day😳

Second I think I am turning into a confused soul I am still so damn confused but I think I will understand everything by the end of your SS which will make it all worth while😃

But on a serious note I did love the update the way Swara never for once doubted that Sanskaar might have done something wrong to her..

And also Lakshya well I see he hadnt had brains in the past and does not have them now either... Well done Adarsh he was successfull in manipulating Lakshya the way he wanted... And also maybe now first he might act as he has started liking Swara but then he might make her his obsession... (Sorry I can never call his obsession Love)

Originally posted by: princess_tara

awesome update

Originally posted by: TRPS

hey dear!!!! your new reader here. 😊 err!!! rhyming naaa!! kabki kabhi ho jaati hai galti se.. 😆
you are one of the best writers I have come across on IF. Very talented , a different style of writing, so fluent with words, I wish even a little bit ability of expressing so I can tell you how awesome you are, the appreciation you deserve and yeah, also don't find our Swasan's conversation and expressive moments in serial so "jyaadaa senti ho gaya type". 😛
ok, coming to point...I have started to read your story from the very first day when you posted, but still couldn't gather the apt words and courage to post reply in your praises *sorry* . in my opinion good stories like yours do not deserve just one word( sorry if I hurted anyone, don't take me wrong, I seriously understand your situation 😆 ) when you wrote a long , meaningful , chapters with full of emotions. and that is why I still owe a comment on Viji's OS. 😛 😳
well, now can't resist myself from telling you that your combination of poison and elixir is quite alluring. just love the connection of love , unsaid understanding between Swasan especially their ability of understanding of each other without a word said, so intense and passionate as I am seriously a fan of sanely intense love and it's story. you have woven the story so well, chapter by chapter more intriguing, more interest capturing .

in the end , I would like to say ,keep showering your wonderful pieces of writing on us and bear my inexpressive comments now onwards. 😉 🤗