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kaku17

@kaku17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

hmmm lovely update...I have always believed that apart from other people's contribution in Ragini's changed demeanour, swara also had a hand in it albeit unknowingly...ultimately its Ragini's decision to hop over to the darker side completely but we still can't overlook other's contributions...and you have brought that out so beautifully...👏.

I was really glad that swara finally realised where she erred...😊...otherwise in the show by the speed she's moving she'll forever be crowned the dumbest and stupidest character to have evr graced the tv as the lead...🤢

please update soon and if possible do pm me...

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

read all the part in one go...

Loved them all..

Loved the fact that sanskar didnt distant swara and started avoiding him as in serial...

Love the fact that swara cared for sanskar and she too equal initiative to spend time with sanskar...

Swara talk with ragini was good and clean..

But I didnt the idea behind her act???

Waiting for sanskar to return soon..

Continue soon...

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Heya Foresight!
😊

Been meaning to read and comment on this awesome story for so long.😳.

Book marking for now..

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DeewanaMastana

@DeewanaMastana

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Wow!! Loved how Swara realised her mistake and confronted Ragino. Hope now she changes for good .

Eagerly waiting for the next update :)

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: kaku17
hmmm lovely update...I have always believed that apart from other people's contribution in Ragini's changed demeanour, swara also had a hand in it albeit unknowingly...ultimately its Ragini's decision to hop over to the darker side completely but we still can't overlook other's contributions...and you have brought that out so beautifully...👏.

I was really glad that swara finally realised where she erred...😊...otherwise in the show by the speed she's moving she'll forever be crowned the dumbest and stupidest character to have evr graced the tv as the lead...🤢

please update soon and if possible do pm me...

Thanks Kaku. Yes, I felt that it was important for her to realise it and finally apologise for her own sake as well as Ragini's ...this was my way to speed up the things in the show 😉 😃

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
read all the part in one go...
Loved them all..

Loved the fact that sanskar didnt distant swara and started avoiding him as in serial...
Love the fact that swara cared for sanskar and she too equal initiative to spend time with sanskar...

Swara talk with ragini was good and clean..
But I didnt the idea behind her act???

Waiting for sanskar to return soon..
Continue soon...

Thanks Jidnyasa.

Swara always said that if Ragini had told her, she would have given up Laksh. I felt the somewhere, there must also be guilt in her ...wondering if she herself had recognised ragini's feelings and backed off, if it would have stopped this new ragini from ever being created. in a way she feels should could have may be avoid all the mess and she could have prevented the loss of a sister...so the apology was to give her her peace of mind and to help ragini as well see that her feelings matter.

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Heya Foresight!
😊

Been meaning to read and comment on this awesome story for so long.😳.

Book marking for now..

will wait to hear your comments...hope you like it

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: DeewanaMastana
Wow!! Loved how Swara realised her mistake and confronted Ragino. Hope now she changes for good .
Eagerly waiting for the next update :)

thanks so much...i hope Ragini wakes up soon too...but too much has happened ...she will need more to be convinced and she will also need time.