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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Loved the updates! I am so glad Swara realized her feelings for Sanskaar but what is AP doing? Please don't tell me that hse is going to ask Swara to give Lakshya a chance! Now you have me on tenetrhooks and I really hope you update soon! No pressure though 😉

P.S. I like this Lakshya. He is sensible and I pray he is not acting...

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Loved the updates! I am so glad Swara realized her feelings for Sanskaar but what is AP doing? Please don't tell me that hse is going to ask Swara to give Lakshya a chance! Now you have me on tenetrhooks and I really hope you update soon! No pressure though 😉
P.S. I like this Lakshya. He is sensible and I pray he is not acting...

Thanks so much bloomnsky...glad you liked it.

I guess after falling asleep in his bed, even out great Swara couldn't deny what she was feeling.

i will update soon...😃. wait for the twist in the next one ...

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Sorry for being MIA for some time.. i have been busy updating my FF..

Finally the storm is slowly clearing.. the thought process of all the four characters is sketched amazingly.

Thanks for the pm.

Cheers

Sharon.

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Sparkler8
Sorry for being MIA for some time.. i have been busy updating my FF..
Finally the storm is slowly clearing.. the thought process of all the four characters is sketched amazingly.

Thanks for the pm.

Cheers
Sharon.

Thanks Sharon. Yes storm slowly calming down. I didn't have the patience for it to drag as much as in the show. 😃

Edited by foresight - 9 years ago

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950660

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

wow..
superb !! loved both d updates..
waiting for more..

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

i really am bad in commenting upon the stories though i absolutely love reading this one.
so please forgive me FS.. when i just 'like' and scoot.

I really loved the updates.. my stand out moments would Swara asking for forgiveness from Ragini and Sanskaar acknowledging his part too in making Ragini what she had become (though Ragini herself had a major role to play in turning out to be what she is now).. that was subtle and well thought of.
i wish to see this in serial.

and loved the thoughts and emotions of Sanskaar and Swara.
Hope AP would not prove to be proverbial spoke in this love wheel.😆. but looks like she would be.

love the updates girl! (may i know your name please? i.e if you don't mind.😳)

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...
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i really am bad in commenting upon the stories though i absolutely love reading this one.
so please forgive me FS.. when i just 'like' and scoot.

I really loved the updates.. my stand out moments would Swara asking for forgiveness from Ragini and Sanskaar acknowledging his part too in making Ragini what she had become (though Ragini herself had a major role to play in turning out to be what she is now).. that was subtle and well thought of.
i wish to see this in serial.

and loved the thoughts and emotions of Sanskaar and Swara.
Hope AP would not prove to be proverbial spoke in this love wheel.😆. but looks like she would be.

love the updates girl! (may i know your name please? i.e if you don't mind.😳)
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Thanks for your comments. I am Sapna. What is your name...Sorry if I missed it before