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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Awesome update as always!

What happened to the bit with AP from the past 9? What did she do?
Sanskaar's plane crashed? I almost hyperventilated before reaching the end and finding out that he was alive!
I am so happy that Ragini has decided to change!
Will SwaSan confess in the next part? Looking forward to the next part to read about Swara's reaction at seeing Sanskaar.


i didnt want to scare you guys too much hence bought him back soon 😆
with AP, it will be revealed soon...not much long wait for it now, i promise
look out for the next one...you will like it 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: DeewanaMastana

OMG!! What a shocking twist was that? 😲

Thank God the chapter ended on a good note though 😛
Brilliant update , as always 👍🏼
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter 😊


thanks 😃
yup...didnt want to leave you with this twist, tried to bring sanky back soon
the other twists will open up in time
next one will be swasan-licious
Edited by foresight - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: foresight


thanks 😃
yup...didnt want to leave you with this twist, tried to bring sanky back soon
the other twists will open up in time
next one will be swasan-licious

Yayyy!! Cant wait now 😛
Please update super soon 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
waiting for next part to know what has really happened
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
WoW!I I so loved this latest update on so many levels!!


First the jatka, which evn though i knew was temp, did affect me... hmm... But loved that it led to Ragini's sense coming back to her... She finally understood everybdy r losers on the revnge path... Thn loved the breaking news entry of our boyo who seems to be bk frm the dead! hayee!

Waiting for sm hrt wrnching cnfessns nw... ❤️


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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
awesome updates. the story is going great.
last two update were very interesting. Eager to know what happened wich led to distort conditions of everyone who love sanskar.
om me when you update next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Awesome update!! I read all the parts in one go because I couldn't stop after reading the first parts ⭐️
Thanks for making Ragini understand that she was wrong and bring the old Ragini back.👏
I really wanna see Swasan confession in the next parts...
plzz update soon and do pm me plzz...

again it was an amazing update!!!

Aksh❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

You are a wonderful writer. 😊

Absolutely love the way you analyse each moment and describe every emotion the character is feeling. As a reader, I could really connect with your work.⭐️

In the first chapter, the dilemma Sanskaar faces was marvellously portrayed. His altruistic nature when it comes to Swara along with that enduring guilt of bringing in a storm into the life of an innocent soul.

It wasn't easy to reconcile the fact that the person who had become the reason for your happiness, the core of your existence, would one day walk out of your life leaving a gaping hole that would bleed for love and that you would only try to mend with bandages of friendship.

Brilliantly put. 👏

The second chapter is another great piece! ⭐️ A fab representation of the conflict faced by another character- Annapurna. Personally, I find her so hard to read and I still haven't decided her if I like her or not (as a Swasan fan😆). It was interesting to read your take on what is going through her mind. Nice to see that she truly understands the depth in which Sanskaar loves Swara, but the fact that she almost tries to measure the dose of Swara needed in her own son's life is intriguing. It came across to me as though she recognises the differences in the affection the two brothers have for Swara- she knows that Laksh's is driven by craze, it will bring destruction, but her perception of Sanskaar's love gives off positive vibes. Very eager to know who she's off to talk to in the middle of the night. I feel like it's Swara. I wonder which path she's more inclined to take. I'm off to read the next chapter, you have me hooked! 😃

Edited by ros_aavir - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
How adorable was part 3 &4 !
Really liked you observed that Swara is trying to juggle lies. Other people's lies. Just giving herself more work than needs be. 🤪 This Swara is sensible though! I'm glad she realised early on (well...😆) that she's been tossed about in the mud enough. It's so good to see a girl giving priority to herself after recognising that she has lost her sense of self because life kicked some ass- really hope this happens in the show soon. Strong girls are the best. ⭐️

High five to Swara for setting out boundaries and making it very clear to Laksh that she's not his toy. Wish show-wala Swara would take a leaf out of this book!

The events of the past day and today and the anxiety over him was making her feel as though she had a bowling ball sized knot in her stomach and someone had tied an anchor to her legs before throwing her into a whirlpool.

This sentence is extremely interesting. Sanskaar brought the storm into Swara's life and he's afraid of the final consequences. But here, clearly Swara is seeing Sanskaar as her anchor. The one who will hold her in place during this phase. Love love love the way she craves for his input and his presence. Her mock anger at him is adorable. The advice Sanskaar gives to her are so wise and insightful. 😳

Just like in the show, she is angry, she goes on her rantings without stopping for breath 😉, he listens, she asks for his opinion, then shuts him up, he brings up some damn good points, makes her feel at complete awe, he cracks a joke, they share some light hearted moments. Cuteee! ❤️
Edited by ros_aavir - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Awesome update on part 5!
It's always nice to see when a character is shown to have a life besides these love triangles and rectangles. Sanskaar's ambitious nature was lovely to read about. Made him sound even more human! 😆

Swara running after Sanskaar like a typical wife, fussing about his health, setting out his clothes, serving him breakfast, waiting for his return to spend some quality time.. LOVING IT! ⭐️ It feels so good seeing her making all the effort to converse with him daily and moulding him into her life. 😳

It was at this time that she realised that Sanskar had become the voice in her head. He had become the voice of her conscience.

Hayeee

Intriguing part 6. 😊 Really liking Annapurna in this story. Seems like she's using the brain God has so kindly gifted her with and is trying to get to the bottom of the situation before going on an accusation spree. Although you wrote this a little while ago, the show seems to be going this way too. It's almost as if though you predicted it. I thought AP would favour Laksh, but she is actually being neutral in the show. 😳

Her observation about DP-RP relationship is refreshingly insightful. Ram is viewed as the pet of DP by most, even by me, but this gave me something to think about. They may in fact be equals in many ways and there is defiantly a mutual understanding between them. Her take on Sujata almost made me feel pity for the woman. Her obstinate and impulsive nature lets her down massively, but I admire her wit. 😆

It is clear Annapurna will play a major role in the direction of the storm that is brewing, eagerly moving onto next chapter to see what unfolds.
Edited by ros_aavir - 9 years ago

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