SwaSan SS: Eye of the Storm - DELETED - Page 15

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Awesome ss

Just completed reading it

Loved it

Can you send me pm when you update ur other works

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Hey,
Read this short story/fanfiction in one go. It was utter brilliance!

I am completely delighted in the way you have shown the four of them, the way you have portrayed them all, especially Ragini. I have always been a little biased towards her because of how she is portrayed. She was not negative but circumstances made her so. Truthfully no normal person would have done all that she has done but it should also be pointed out that no normal person would have just given up. I absolutely loved the way you have shown the reasons for her becoming who she was, how she got her revenge and still did not find peace. Seriously keeping SwaSan aside, hats off for the way you have portrayed Ragini. That part in itself made me a fan of your writing because it is very easy to make her a complete villain but portraying her the way you have is genius. And ofcourse that apology given by Swara to Ragini. It was much needed and much deserved. Brillliance!

Coming to Annapurna, you have done such justice to her character that I am speechless. Gosh! She has such strength and potential, such resolute patience, you have complete taken those amaazing qualities and shown her as the matriach of the family and the mother of her TWO sons. Absolutely fantastic!

Coming to SwaSan, that plane crash gave a mild heart attack! :P Loved the way you have shown the slow process of Swara falling for Sanskaar, Sanskaar's feelings, his heartbreak and then a peace and happiness on realising his love is reciprocated, Swara-Sanskaar separation. It was so well structured and written. It was a flow and a really really well written story. The teasing moments were a delight to read. :)

Lakshya. Now what to say about him. I was sort of hoping for a little Ragya I guess because I am a Ragya shipper but I wasn't at all disappointed with the way you shaped him. Slowly realising his obsession, sand letting go. That was a complete master stroke!

Sujata scenes have always amused me so all I can say is 'keep them coming'. She is another character in the show that I adore because she says what she thinks in such a hilarious manner it makes me crack up. Thanks for those light hearted scenes.

Again, loved this SS. Keep writing. You have a good talent for it. :)

-V :)

Originally posted by: RAONE8

AWESOME Story⭐️👏👏

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Hi Sapna,

Loved this SS dear, FInally caught up with all the chapters in one day. It always fun to read an SS together in one go. I loved this one so much , Especially AP behaved like a mature person. Her advice to Swara was good. Loved Swara realization due to the distance between her and Sanskar.

Also liked Lakshya and Ragini moving on , both for different reasons but sill i liked that they moved on. Awesome SS dear.