MY BET IS ALWAYS ON YOU- Swasan TS *PART-1 PG1* (NOTE Pg-9)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
wow dear
t's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, flawless and mind blowing start...

just loved it...

beautiful.

continue soon...

thanks for the pm

Thank u so much Swetha dearie!! 🤗 🤗

I'm so happy u liked it! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ros_aavir
This is such a beautifully written piece!😳

Those two first paragraphs brought so many lovely memories of my childhood in India. 🤗 Making paper boats, drinking garam garam coffee, playing out in the rain without a care in the world. Aaah those were the days! 😊

That analogy you used of tracing the water drops as a forewarning to Swara about how life is going to be was awesome!👏 It is a wonderful reflection Swara is having here- although I hope some innocence remain within her and doesn't get tarnished by the ways of the world.

Love the way she thinks about Sanskaar. ⭐️ So much affection, admiration and respect for the man in her thoughts. ❤️

"The new Swara who has risen from ashes of treachary "

This is superbly put, reflects the huge amount of strength and determination this girl has. One can only hope this happens in the show. 😆

Her pain and angst in breaking the man she loves is clear and I'm loving it. Loving this Swara. Can't wait to see what unfolds next! 😃

Thank u so much dear! 😳 I'm so happy it brought back lovely memories to u. 😃 Actually all those things mentioned in the 1st 2 paras,including the water droplet chasing n paper boats r the things I have done in my childhood! 😳 My grandpa used to pick me up frm school n used to get me a ton of chocolates but used to tell me not to tell my dad who used to find out abt it inevitably n scold both of us! 😆 Really the good ol' times! SIGH...

Anyway i'm really glad u liked reading this. Will update soon. 😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb..beautifully written..update soon

Thnk u dear. 😳

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Classic...plz continue soon...🤗

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: krishuuu
Classic...plz continue soon...🤗

Thank u 🤗 Will surely do! 😳

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swetapatel55

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

LUVD IT GREATLY!!! hope u continue soon with the next part!!!! it really was osum!!1

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hi dearies! 🤗 Wish a all a very happy new year! 🥳

N hmm about the next part well all I can say is that I'm really sorry for the delay sweeties... I haven't be well for past few weeks... But dun worry will surely complete this and all the incomplete ones in the coming weeks...😳

By that time if u r interested, u can chk out my completed works here

SWARAGINI Index - CLICK HERE 😳

Thank u for ur understanding and patience!😃

Luv Niki