MY BET IS ALWAYS ON YOU- Swasan TS *PART-1 PG1* (NOTE Pg-9)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: foresight
Really nice one.
I do hope though that Swara doesnt drag this all the way to wedding in the show though. I hope she teaches Laksh the right lessons - as she seems to be planning - much sooner.

Thanks yar. 😳 And yeah even I hope she doesn't drag it till the end in the show... But more than that I hope she is actually planning on doing something to show her devarji the reality first! I really don't want her to be dumb anymore, I just am fed up with this new Swara in the show. Old one used to be so feisty and brainy! New one is...🥱Sigh...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: iam-in-love
its jst awsm...
loved it...

reading a TS frm Swaras POV is vry nyc... And described her feeling vry beautyfully...
Yes... Without TRUST & FAITH , Love is nothing...

update nxt pt soon...

Thank u yar. I'm glad u are liking it so far. 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: anjum78
Wooow...awesome dear
Amazing...
Sometimes na me just feels jealou from u all guyz...kitna accha likhte ho tum log..
I am trying to write smthing from last one month...concept bi h dimaag me bas likh hi nai pati..

Aww thank u dear! 😳 But u knw what? It took me many years to improve my writing dear... So it's ok if you feel ur writing isn't good at the moment, all u got to do is to try ur current best and post the story. U will improve only if u keep writing... Everybody makes mistakes, don't make that stop u... As and when u go further, ur writing will also automatically improve! 😳

So all the very best dear! And yeah do PM me when u finally post ur story, would love to read it! 😃

- Luv Niki

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#24

Originally posted by: dundumol96
Ab tak sab log swara ke zindgi ke saath khel khela

ab dekte hai swara kya khelti hai??????

I just want full show down for yucky

hehe yeah this Swara surely is planning to show everybody the mirror of reality! 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: The-Heart
Wow Awesome OS
I am glad finally swara realized the position of sanskar in her life
Waiting for next part to know which game swara going to play

Thank u yar. Glad u liked it. 😳

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#26

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
awesome part
want to know about Sanskar's perspective

Thank u dear.😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
A beautiful start! I hope Swara won't cut it too close with the wedding! I loved the way you wrote about Swara's emotions especially her heart break and her anger towards Sanskaar for asking her to give Lakshya a chance.
Can't wait to read the second part to read about Swara's plan.

Thank u yar. Glad u liked the starting. 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome

Thank u! 😃

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#29

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer
Nice one yaar!
The turmoil going on in Swara's heart was very well described.
Do update soon

Thank u yar. Glad u liked this part. 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: suhasini2727
its completely awesome nikki
very well written👏
how beautifully u wrote her childhood memories with dida... and monsoon weather
her take on innocence and ignorance
her faith and confidence on sanskaar z amazing dr
loved this version of swara ... specially towards laksh
'she would never ever want to associate herself with'... superb
awww ,,, n how her heart aches to c sanskaar in pain
eagerly waiting 4 next honey...
i always wanted to read a story like this... swara's version ,her attitude.
tx nikki... for the pm too🤗