MY BET IS ALWAYS ON YOU- Swasan TS *PART-1 PG1* (NOTE Pg-9) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Suha thank u so much hun!! 🤗 🤗 🤗

I'm really glad u liked this part. And yeah will try my best to update asap! 😳

Originally posted by: kulsum_5

wow Nikk awesome start..👏
loved this swara..!! she is so determined and not allowing anyone to play with her life not even sanskaar..😊 she is fighting for her right and love.. can we see this swara in show as well..😉
loved this part..
eagerly waiting for your next part...😃

Originally posted by: ketty84

buddy very well written like you are in swara head mean in writer head

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Nikz 🤗 Amazing start of this TS. I loved the fact that you wrote it taking Swara's POV.
The initial description of the rain, how Dida used to buy her the ice candy and keeping it as a secret between her and Swara was beautiful and very sweet 😳
Finally here she realized Sanskar's importance. I loved it when she said that she wouldn't ever associate the name Laksh Maheshwari with her.
This line 'Mr. Sanskar Maheshwari, the proud and rightful owner of my heart. 👏
Continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: suhasini2727

take ur time darling... i just dnt want to miss it🤗

Originally posted by: viva_rockzz

its very nice!!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Interesting!

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Aww thank u dear! 😳 But u knw what? It took me many years to improve my writing dear... So it's ok if you feel ur writing isn't good at the moment, all u got to do is to try ur current best and post the story. U will improve only if u keep writing... Everybody makes mistakes, don't make that stop u... As and when u go further, ur writing will also automatically improve! 😳

So all the very best dear! And yeah do PM me when u finally post ur story, would love to read it! 😃

- Luv Niki

Originally posted by: anjum78

Thank u dear.. for ur motivation

Now i'll definately try n post it here..asap

But now plzzz u update dis shot.

N do pm plzzz...

Niki,
Really nicely done as I expect from you:). I loved this Swara, she is the Swara they teased us with before on the show before replacing her with some mass appealing mahaanta ki moorat, also dumb in the process. I so love how she wants to open her heart to Sanskaar and is wishing for him to save her. Nice! Waiting for next update x