MY BET IS ALWAYS ON YOU- Swasan TS *PART-1 PG1* (NOTE Pg-9) - Page 5

Awesome update dear

Just loved this part.. Swara understood she loved Sanskaar.. Awesome.. Sanskaar the most reliable person.. Waiting for next part.. Thanks for PM.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Niki,
Really nicely done as I expect from you:). I loved this Swara, she is the Swara they teased us with before on the show before replacing her with some mass appealing mahaanta ki moorat, also dumb in the process. I so love how she wants to open her heart to Sanskaar and is wishing for him to save her. Nice! Waiting for next update x

Originally posted by: mika17

Awesome update

Loved it

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update dear

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Purbishona

Just loved this part.. Swara understood she loved Sanskaar.. Awesome.. Sanskaar the most reliable person.. Waiting for next part.. Thanks for PM.

Originally posted by: Prizi

really amazinggg

Originally posted by: -Jamina

Awesome 👏

wow dear

This is such a beautifully written piece!😳

Those two first paragraphs brought so many lovely memories of my childhood in India. 🤗 Making paper boats, drinking garam garam coffee, playing out in the rain without a care in the world. Aaah those were the days! 😊

That analogy you used of tracing the water drops as a forewarning to Swara about how life is going to be was awesome!👏 It is a wonderful reflection Swara is having here- although I hope some innocence remain within her and doesn't get tarnished by the ways of the world.

Love the way she thinks about Sanskaar. ⭐️ So much affection, admiration and respect for the man in her thoughts. ❤️

"The new Swara who has risen from ashes of treachary "

This is superbly put, reflects the huge amount of strength and determination this girl has. One can only hope this happens in the show. 😆

Her pain and angst in breaking the man she loves is clear and I'm loving it. Loving this Swara. Can't wait to see what unfolds next! 😃