MY BET IS ALWAYS ON YOU- Swasan TS *PART-1 PG1* (NOTE Pg-9)

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Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Awesome update dear

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Just loved this part.. Swara understood she loved Sanskaar.. Awesome.. Sanskaar the most reliable person.. Waiting for next part.. Thanks for PM.

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Niki,
Really nicely done as I expect from you:). I loved this Swara, she is the Swara they teased us with before on the show before replacing her with some mass appealing mahaanta ki moorat, also dumb in the process. I so love how she wants to open her heart to Sanskaar and is wishing for him to save her. Nice! Waiting for next update x

Shruthi! 🤗 Thnk u so much swthrt! Glad u liked this Swara... Actually if I was even remotely interested in this show before swasan, it was because of Swara! She was a refreshing character in the world of terribly boring telly heroines... Then swasan happened and I was hooked to the show... But amidst all this love story the old feisty brainy Swara got lost somewhere and that is something which keeps pricking me every time I watch the show now-a days... So I got fed up waiting of CVs to rectify it and decided to tk thngs into my own hands... literally! 😆😆

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mika17
Awesome update
Loved it

Thank u dear. 😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
Awesome update dear
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Thank u dear. 😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Purbishona
Just loved this part.. Swara understood she loved Sanskaar.. Awesome.. Sanskaar the most reliable person.. Waiting for next part.. Thanks for PM.

Thanks dearie. 😳 Glad u r liking the plot so far...😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Prizi
really amazinggg

Thank u!! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: -Jamina
Awesome 👏

Thank u! 😳😳

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

wow dear

t's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, flawless and mind blowing start...

just loved it...

beautiful.

continue soon...

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-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

This is such a beautifully written piece!😳

Those two first paragraphs brought so many lovely memories of my childhood in India. 🤗 Making paper boats, drinking garam garam coffee, playing out in the rain without a care in the world. Aaah those were the days! 😊

That analogy you used of tracing the water drops as a forewarning to Swara about how life is going to be was awesome!👏 It is a wonderful reflection Swara is having here- although I hope some innocence remain within her and doesn't get tarnished by the ways of the world.

Love the way she thinks about Sanskaar. ⭐️ So much affection, admiration and respect for the man in her thoughts. ❤️

"The new Swara who has risen from ashes of treachary "

This is superbly put, reflects the huge amount of strength and determination this girl has. One can only hope this happens in the show. 😆

Her pain and angst in breaking the man she loves is clear and I'm loving it. Loving this Swara. Can't wait to see what unfolds next! 😃