SwaSan Diwali OS 'The Lights of Love'

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Viji my dearest friend..With this one you have proved that u r writer of great caliber...You nail every genre be it romantic thriller mystery or humorous one...u nail it
The OS came as a surprise...After bejha frying with books from morning it was like a refreshment...lifted my mood completely...Can u believe the subject name is risk ...disaster risk...pathetic indeed!!
This take on swasan was like a breath of fresh air...I absolutely loved the whole story...!!
"ust as she
had filled the gaping holes in his soul, and he
had healed the bruises on hers".
I don't think there relationship and repo could be described better than this ...take a bow dear
You had recommended some books of agatha Christie and Sydney Sheldon to someone in your previous story...I ransacked whole study of my dad to find those...(by the way he is prof of eng lit)
got a good scolding
I am so humbled that u dedicated this wonderful story to me...am indebted to u for this
And considering ur request for writing a poem on swasan ...am so busy with these stupid exams ..once I niptaofy them...I might write...n surely u wud b the first person with whom I gonna share...!!!
Well I absolutely loved the quote about poetry n fiction...!!
keep writing more n more...u Should consider writing a novel viji ...u r hugely talented n should utilise it...I truely believe it
happy diwali in advance..stay safe

Edited by samiya.059 - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Nice OS!

Thanks Mystic 😊 wish you a very happy Diwali 😊

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Viji thank you for this beautiful Diwali gift 🤗
How do you manage to write this stories? Hats off to your incredible imagination 👏
It was a treat to read this OS.
The initial nok-jhok between SwaSan was super duper cute, typical hubby-wife 😳
Aww DP, he is awesome. He truly loves Swara and consider her as his daughter 😳 Oh i loved Sanskar's dialogue here, about DP loving her more than him 😆
The description in the room was beautiful ❤️ And this line 'Jaan----you said you love fireworks, didn't you? It would be so much fun, wouldn't it, to have some in our room later?" ☺️ Got to see a completely different Sanskar here 😉
Thank you once again for this beautiful Diwali gift Viji. Happy Diwali to you and your family 🤗

Edited by Smilelicious - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ketty84

Gud one

Thanks so much Ketty 😊 Happy Diwali to you and yours, dear 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: rerose
Viji,this was just splendidly awesome dear,loved ur OS a lot👏👏👏

Thanks Jenny dear. 😊 Very glad you liked this OS. Wish you and your family a very happy Diwali dear...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: princess_tara
lovely

Thanks Tara 😊 Wish you a happy Diwali.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: dundumol96
How sweet...

No tension and no problems and most importantly no third wheels

i just hope serial main bhi lux ji aur ragini ko bhi kahi door bech de
tab bhi swasan hav their own fire work done

Dundumol dear, your comments are always so humorous. Even for the last TS of mine, your remarks about Lakshya and Ragini made me laugh till my stomach ached. 🤣

Thanks so much for your lovely words about this OS. Wish you and your family a wonderful festive season.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: bwvianna
Hey,

Absolutely fantastic as usual!!! I had a huge smile the whole while I was reading this fanfic :D Its so cute!! Thank you for such a sweet one shot just before Diwali.!

Please keep writing. Looking forward to more fanfics from you. Have a wonderful and prosperous Diwali! :)

-V

Hi Vrinda 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much dear. Would you like me to address you as V or as Vrinda, BTW?

Am very glad you liked this OS. I wanted to give SwaSan a lovely Diwali too! They need it, na? 😉

Happy Diwali to you and yours. May God be with you and stay safe.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Lovely diwali gift.
Hw much i lv ths naughty sanskar & in4nt of him timid swara.
Ya,thts gd.sansku mk maa dida in his team so swara mk dp in her team.
Among those mm wasis only dp is sensible.
I lk tht no delusnal ppl was thr.
Do write more

Hey dear...thanks so much. 😊 I think this is the first time you are reading my work? I've not had the pleasure of having you comment on my threads before, I think.

I'm Viji btw. What is your name? Can I call you Sonu?

Very glad you liked this OS dear. Thanks for all the lovely words. I wanted to give SwaSan a very Happy Diwali as well. They deserve it, na? 😊

Wish you and your family a lovely Diwali!!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: manasie23
Viji! 🤗 Just when I was longing to read something... I received your pm...
This OneShot was sooo aaawww... it was sweet, cute.. I totally lovedit.
In the beginning even I was kinda scandalised what were they talking about but even before you revealed it I realised must be something related to diwali 😆
Keep writing more because I seriously do love to read your writings

-Manasi 😳

Hello Manasi dear...😊 Thanks for your lovely comment. Very glad you liked this OS. Wish you and your family a very very Happy Diwali dear.

I wanted to give SwaSan some lovely romantic moments and a very happy Diwali. They need it, na? 😊