SwaSan Diwali OS 'The Lights of Love'

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Wow.
A Diwali treat before the actual Diwali.
Thnx a lot. Loved the OS. It's really beautiful.

SwaSan r so cute together nd the conversation at the end. Fireworks to humare dimaag mein futenge woh scenes imagine kar ke. 😳

Happy Diwali to u. Aap aise hi Hume OS / TS ki daawat pesh kare yehi God se pray karte hain.

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Ramya

@The-Heart

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Awesome piece of writing with unique and romantic flavor😳

In the beginning conversation in room is awesome

I love to read your writings and waiting for your next OS

Happy Diwali

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Sakura24
it is a piece of writing that is also bright with the lights of love Viji. To say I've enjoyed it would be an underestimation. Nowadays I seriously enjoy the lighthearted tales circling our beloved couple, portraying them past this dark phase of their lives and deeply in love. This would be the best of that kind. I would write more, but have to go for some urgent work, will come back later and read it again until my heart has its fill of joy and then comment once more.
Happy Diwali to you too!

Saku darling. 🤗 🤗 Thanks so much for this lovely comment. Made me feel very bright and festive. 😊 Yeah, I wanted to give them lighthearted and carefree moments. They need it yaar. The show is putting them through so much pain!

Thanks for commenting in detail in the later post, I shall read that to my heart's content and reply tomorrow.

Wish you too, a Very Happy Diwali dear!

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a_uma

@a_uma

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

beautiful OS... can never tire reading about swasan moments..

..its great that the dark clouds have gone away from swasan's life... ( Rag and Lux 😉) ...hope we get to see this on the show..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love
unres page 6

Thanks a ton Nityah darling. Will check and reply tomorrow as I am almost asleep on my feet now. 😉

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Monica_Suhasini

@Monica_Suhasini

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

ITS WONDERFUL VIJI⭐️

HILARIOUS EXPRESSIONS IN THE BIGGINING👏

COMEBACK OF OLD SWARA AND SANSKAAR IS REALLY GRACEFUL AND SWEET🤗

DP SUCH A SENSIBLE GUY ... LOVE HIM FOR ASKING THEM TO HAVE A GENUINE TRY❤️

HOW CUTELY SWARA ASKED PERMISSION AND HOW DURGA PRASAD ACCEPTED WITH A REAL SMILE... 😃

M JEALOUS U HAVE MADE MY BADE PAPA LOVE YOU MORE THAN ME

REVENGE FOR MAKING MY DIDA N MAA LOVE YOU MORE THAN THEY DO ME

LOVED ABOVE LINES

SWASAN COMPLIMENTING EACH OTHER...❤️

ITS A TREAT TO WATCH NAUGHTY ROMANTIC AND MISCHIEVOUS SANSKAAR

AFTER UR THRILLING TS THIS OS IS SOO COOOL😊

TOTALLY LOVED IT

HAPPY DIWALI IN ADVANCE TO YOU TOO... STAY BLESSED😊

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someonelikeyou-

@someonelikeyou-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

you need someone,who can have a tight hold of your hand,not because he wants to touch you,but instead,he wants to protect you and genuinely cares for you..

beautiful Viji

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Isha

@JilyPotter

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

I knew that what Swara and Sanskaar were saying going to be the total opposite of what our dear Mashewari Kandaan's minds cooked up! Honestly I want this Durga Parsad in the show! I want him to smile, just at Swara because he honestly trusts her so much more, and adores her loud but righteous personality! Swara clearly does not understand an innuendo when its thrown directly at her haha! But I love that she isn't shy either! I would never take her to be the shy wife anyway!

Thanks for the lovely story, Happy Diwali, and look forward to your next story!

And sorry for all the late replies, and giving them all in a lump sum! 😳

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Vianna

@BookWormV

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Vrinda🤗🤗

Thanks so much dear. Would you like me to address you as V or as Vrinda, BTW?

Am very glad you liked this OS. I wanted to give SwaSan a lovely Diwali too! They need it, na?😉

Happy Diwali to you and yours. May God be with you and stay safe.

:D Yes SwaSan need a happy and wonderful Diwali. Address me as you wish. :)

-V

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Happy Diwali, Viji!!! You have made my Diwali with this OS.

How I wish I could write like you! I am learning and will get there eventually.

Coming to your OS, Adored each and every word of it. The conversation that was so scandalous to the Maheshwari family turning out to be a 100shot fireworks. 🤣 Goodness! I could honestly hear the thoughts exactly in the character's voice.

Then the outfits admiration. Can this couple please, pretty please, jump over to the actual show? SwaSan are so lost in each other.

Or may be I should credit this to your writing. I could feel my cheeks burning while reading that scene.

Thanks Viji for this fabulous Diwali OS!!!👏