SwaSan Diwali OS 'The Lights of Love'

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Cintila
res...(haven't read it yet 😳)
Will read your other OS too Viji...do do saath me..yaay !! My day is made 🤗

Hey Tuhi 😊 hope you like them both. They are completely different genres from each other. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: kaku17
Viji my dear...🤗

it was such a delight to read this one...Swara brought the old sanskaar back and in turn she also learnt to laugh and live freely again...both really do complete each other...this kind of love, pure content in their life is so feel good...it sent a warm fudgy feeling to my heart and I was also smiling throughout in happiness as their bliss seemed to rub on me...😃

A very happy and prosperous Diwali to you and your family...god bless...

Hey Kaku dear...thanks so much for your lovely comment 😊 Am so very glad you liked this OS. I wanted to give SwaSan a Happy Diwali together. They deserve it, no? 😊

A very Happy Diwali to you and yours dear...

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Viji... 😆😆😆😆
Thank you for such a fluffy sweet gift and happy diwali to you too... May loads of prosperity come to you this diwali.
Coming to OS... the starting conversation of SwaSan had me chuckling... I knew its not what it seems but it just brought a silly grin on my face. Loved the light and happy environment of MM and the reactions of everyone...😆😆😆 they were so fun to read.
The bonding of Swara and DP... my heart had gone awww reading their interaction.
My most favorite part... SwaSan romance... pure and unadulterated romance... my fan girl heart is cheering for you girl.. It is so beautifully written. There was not even a kiss but I love reading such blissful romantic moments. Amazing just simply amazing... Loved reading this so much...
Love
Nityah... 😳

Edited by Lavender_Love - 9 years ago

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Sapna

@NainoMeinSapna

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Haaye, that was such a cute OS. 😆

Thanks for writing it and making my day! 😳

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

I am all smiles reading this OS !! This is just so cute !! The love, care and light hearted banter between the couple is just tooo beautiful!

Wish you and your family a very happy diwali Viji !

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Hi Viji!

I'm back you see, had written a short comment earlier and went out. But I'm back now and reread the piece two times. How much can I praise you with my little sweet sugar coated words is really unknown to me as anything I might say seems too short to come in terms with the feelings in my mind at the moment.

This is the best Diwali gift one can give. So much happiness bundled up together. That is all love and festivals are all about, happiness in its purest and brightest form.

I truly enjoyed the lightheartedness here. The bond between SwaSan as well as Durga Prasad's concern for Swara. He loves her too much doesn't he? He can even break his own rules for this daughter's happiness...just Awwee...

And Sanskar, he is just too sweet and adorably in love. I'm so glad to see him happy even if it is a world of imagination. The way they converse with each other through thoughts is so beautiful too. Just shows how deep their bond is, they can even read each others thoughts.

I'm glad you kept Ragya out of the story, just by that you made my Diwali. I can't seriously be happy with those two roaming the backdrop of the story. Laksh handling some responsibility in the end sort of made me feel better about him. The end you have given Ragini is apt too. She deserves some isolation not out of hatred but so that she would get out of her imaginary love story.

I don't think anyone can beat this Diwali gift seriously. Thank you so much.

Edited by Sakura24 - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: iam-in-love
unres

Happy Diwali to u too...

Loved dis OS vry much... I was really expecting a SwaSan OS based on Diwali... And u wrote it... Thnk u so much for dis...

SwaSan cnvrsation in their room & other MM members expression on it... I loved it...
Sanskar is jealous bcoz DP loving Swara more than him & Swara is taking sweet revenge frm Sanskar bcoz her mom&dida loves sanskar more than her 😊
SwaSan... They will never change...

Swara wear pink color saree & chosen same color outfits for Sanskar too... Thts so sweet...

Sanskar is so naughty yaar... "There are firework of another kind which we can explod right here..."
SwaSan moments is jst awsm ❤️

beautifull OS yaar... Beutifully written...

Thanks so much dear, for your lovely comment, and that lovely Diwali wish, too! Thanks for the super fast res-ing too. 😊, I was so very touched, that you commented even before my PM went out. 🤗 🤗 I felt honored that you are so interested in my work.

You liked the SwaSan conversation? 😛 I enjoyed writing it thoroughly, chuckling to myself about the double meaning the others could read into it. 😉 I wanted to show that deep bond, that "soul connect" between SwaSan. And their reading of each others' eyes, is enough to debate about Bade papa loving Swara more; and Shomi & Dida loving Sanskaar more. 😊

I wanted to give them a very Happy Diwali. They deserve it, na? 😊 The outfits I imagined from the KC color coordinated ones they were wearing. 😉

Wish you and your family a lovely & safe Diwali!!

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akanksha

@luvakanksha

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

It's a very well written and perfect os

Lovely Swasan chemistry depicted in this os

Great work keep it up

Happy Diwali in advance

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RUQAIYA10

@RUQAIYA10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Viji. Yaar this is not fair. Again you tease us and then leave the rest of the story entirely to our imaginations😆😃. Though short it had enough heat and spark to out dazzle even the biggest firecracker. Your stories have always something new to look forward to. And what stood out for me in this one was the physical aspect of their relationship. The attraction and longing for each other that usually happens during the initial stages of a relationship. This was quite sensuous. Aah Swasan.. My love for them keeps growing and so does my love for a certain taklu in the house.

Sorry will have to keep it short as I got to run. You are awesome as always Viji. 😊. So Here's wishing you a very very Happy and Blessed Diwali and lots and lots of happiness!

PS. Thank you so much for the book recommendations on Mary Higgins Clark. Have noted them down. Hopefully will get my hands on all of them. 😊

🤗❤️

Ruqaiya