SwaSan Diwali OS 'The Lights of Love'

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

How can you do this to me Viji? I was literally blushing reading the intro , oh I very well know that they were referring something else , but my gutter mind explored the possible scandalous meaning of their conversation and I was blushing and smiling reading the reaction of their family members .And the outcome is my colleagues thought that I was reading some chat of my hubby and blushing . 😳

It was amusing and romantic . Loved it Viji.
Happy Diwali dear.

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arohijsp

@arohijsp

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

I can't help smiling.Swasan such a perfect couple. .
Thanks for the lovely OS.
Happy Divali in advance, to you and your family dear!

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Firstly, thank you for the dedication, I am very touched! 😊

Secondly, how do you come up with such beautiful stories?

I loved how Durga Prasad is wrapped around Swara's fingers. That SwaSan conversation about Durga Prasad loving Swara more was hilarious.

I love how Swara and Sanskaar complement one another; that came through strongly through out this piece.

Loved how alive Sanskaar seems and I really hope that in the show we get a Sanskaar who is living and loving his life due to Swara. He is not quite there yet in the show.

I loved the OS and am looking forward to the Holi one.

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Viji,this was just splendidly awesome dear,loved ur OS a lot👏👏👏

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Lovely diwali gift.
Hw much i lv ths naughty sanskar & in4nt of him timid swara.
Ya,thts gd.sansku mk maa dida in his team so swara mk dp in her team.
Among those mm wasis only dp is sensible.
I lk tht no delusnal ppl was thr.
Do write more

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hey,

Absolutely fantastic as usual!!! I had a huge smile the whole while I was reading this fanfic :D Its so cute!! Thank you for such a sweet one shot just before Diwali.!

Please keep writing. Looking forward to more fanfics from you. Have a wonderful and prosperous Diwali! :)

-V

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dundumol96

@dundumol96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

How sweet...

No tension and no problems and most importantly no third wheels

i just hope serial main bhi lux ji aur ragini ko bhi kahi door bech de
tab bhi swasan hav their own fire work done

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

it is a piece of writing that is also bright with the lights of love Viji. To say I've enjoyed it would be an underestimation. Nowadays I seriously enjoy the lighthearted tales circling our beloved couple, portraying them past this dark phase of their lives and deeply in love. This would be the best of that kind. I would write more, but have to go for some urgent work, will come back later and read it again until my heart has its fill of joy and then comment once more.

Happy Diwali to you too!

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Viji🤗,

Its funny, lighthearted and festive.

I adore this MM..now that the trouble duo are nowhere to be seen. I guess the youngest kid in the house, barring Uttara annoyed you to death as well.😉

Yeah...Its quite clear what Swara was begging him for...but iss family mein toh sabko haq ki padi rehti hain😆. Chalo excused.

Swara got her way, I knew DP was more fond of her than any other kid in the house. Matlab grown up kids.

Sanskkar ki sanskkariness ko kya hua? end mein seedha line pe aa gaya.

I do not like fireworks myself...but chalo ek hi toh jalayegi.😊

I got attached to the descriptions of the different kinda firecrackers in the bedroom.😉

Very well written as usual...and Happy Diwali to you and Yours.

Love--

Medha.

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kaku17

@kaku17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Viji my dear...🤗

it was such a delight to read this one...Swara brought the old sanskaar back and in turn she also learnt to laugh and live freely again...both really do complete each other...this kind of love, pure content in their life is so feel good...it sent a warm fudgy feeling to my heart and I was also smiling throughout in happiness as their bliss seemed to rub on me...😃

A very happy and prosperous Diwali to you and your family...god bless...

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