Viji🤗🤗This was such a happy one. I was grinning the entire time I was reading it. Probably made people sitting next to me / around me on the bus think that I had lost it😆
That rather interesting conversation between SwaSan also had me thinking along the very lines that the entire Maheshwari family was!!😳 Of course I knew there was going to be a far less exciting explanation to it. 😛
I loved how you portrayed that obvious connection between them through that conversation through their eyes. It was so adorable that I couldn't help but gush!. I really like the relationship between DP and Swara. I think you know by now how I believe that DP has always been a father-like influence in Swara's life. I really have come to think especially after the "Kanyadaan" that DP is more fatherly to Swara than that useless husband of her mother.🤢 Love how you added that touch in this one. Also that connection between AP and DP. It was all very nicely done.
My favorite part of course had to be the last bit between Mr and Mrs Sanskaar Maheshwari. I liked how you used their outfits (from the Karwa Chauth on the show. That pink was astonishingly becoming on Sanskaar. Is there anything that wouldn't look good on him?❤️ ) to describe how they complement each other so well. Brilliant stuff. And I absolutely loved how you so effortlessly brought in intensity and sensuousness into their equation. Swara being completely oblivious to her "pati's" obvious innuendo and her reaction after her realization.
A very Happy diwali to you and your family too Viji! Hope this Diwali brings you everything you have hoped for. Have a blessed one.🤗
Lots of love,
Geetha
Edited by misaki - 9 years ago
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