Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot - Page 4

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res...🤗 Ok, not res exactly, since I am commenting below, but shall edit to add later. 😉

Shru...I have an elder bro, who I love to bits, but no sis. But Medha & you are freakishly like my soul sistahs on this forum. 😆 Arre so many things we get the same way...Lakshya grabbing Swara and Sansku jerking his hands off, man I was literally grinning when I used that in "Old Sins Cast Long Shadows" and now grinning again when I read it here. Sansku's the man!! 😉

I am rushing to take kiddo to art class, like every sat, Shru. So will edit this comment in detail later, hopefully part 2 shall be up then and can comment on both. Was this the one which had aspects of Swara sick with worry & fear for Sanskaar? That comes up in part 2 is it? Or 3? Tell me! Tell me! I wanna see Swara concerned for Sansku. 😉

Originally posted by: manasie23

Shru 🤗 Do I even have to say anything...
I think you know me well enough to know that I have fallen in love with even this one...
I liked how Swara here is still confused and yes that Sanskaar knows about the photos... I dint get the whole photo deal in the serial if it wasnt to be exposed in front of Sanskaar... kind of senseless if you ask me...
And Sanskaar not asking or listening to any explainations hmmm that is what Sanskaar is I think that once he's made an opinion of something he sticks by it... whatsoever... as like that he is of the opinion that Swara still might have some feelings for his cousin and still is caught up in the fear unable to look past it...
And the whole park scene where Swara forgets all her worries and becomes her old self was a treat to read...
Now now Ragini's malice knows no limit... so now waiting to read what she is going to do to these two love birds

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Yayyy! Yippeee!🥳 Shruti you have no idea how excited I am. Well I'm always excited to read anything from you but this...😳I've been expecting this for days now...after all, the serial twist didn't go the way we all wanted to...oh, only if it had taken that Entrusted route. But no, they have more torture planned for us. I'm sooo thrilled to read this...the soulmates slowly falling in love

I really loved that park walk, almost in a fangirl kind of giddy way, It's so awesome!!!❤️❤️❤️

Please, dear my excitement won't be contained longer...update soon😃

Originally posted by: sadhana.np

Nice part.
Loved it 😊

Originally posted by: suhasini2727

shruthi its amazing...👏👏👏

eagerly waiting for next

Originally posted by: iam-in-love

this TS is jst awsm 😊 loved it...
Sanskar always with her whn she need him . Thts d magic of SwaSan ❤️ . SwaSan enjoying their moments together... & Sanskar want to kiss her... ☺️ Hope we will get SwaSan kiss in coming parts... 😉
Lux didnt revealing Ragini's truth jst bcoz he want swara... 😡 Thts going to hpn only in ur dreams Lux...

update nxt pt soon... I'm vry much excited to read it... Pls PM me... 😊

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

I can't believe it!
I have my NTSE examination tomorrow and yet I'm not studying.
But I prefer ur amazzzing TS over the boring reign of Delhi Sultanate, must say.😊
Coming to it, I must say yaar, It's fab.
The Swasan chemistry and magic that they both can't resist was depicted so very well.
How much they try to pretend a strong connection prevails making their magic so very powerful.
And u put this in the most elegant of words.
And also the way u described Ragini was really good!!
That line which had 'pretended docility' and the oxymoron-deceitful innocence was awesome man.
I was I'm and always be in awe of u yaar!👏👏

Originally posted by: Messi2

was blushing yaar how cute they are was imagining in my head do continue frootie will be waiting pm me

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Thank you so much! You want a kiss?! Well, I'll see what I can do😉. Lakshya will be Lakshya (btw- use full names now due to new Rules). I'll update assoon as I can x</font>