Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot - Page 5

Originally posted by: Sanavi

omg. This is beautiful. Those SwaSan moments were really cute.
Ragini is more sinister than the show nd Lucky toh lucky hain uske bare mein kya kehna.

Waiting for next update.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Sakshi 🤗

OMG- you have exams?! Haha- SwaSan more interesting than the Delhi Sultanate eh?😆 Happy you felt that their clear chemistry came off and yes, they are true soul mates so they have this beautiful connect. Ragini is now a worthy villain so am trying to do her justice . Thanks for taking the time to read and comments especially whilst you are studying, I truly appreciate it and I wish super good luck for the exams. Be back soon! xoxo

Trust me Shruti, I can't miss reading ur TS! U r one of my fav writers. And thnx for such an awesome writeup and the good luck wish! 🤗

Swasan moments are very cute😳 and glad swara started doubting the cunning ragini.

Shruti my dear...🤗

loved it...especially when sanskaar yanked lakshya's hand from swara's... 😈...was really wishing sanskaar to give a solid punch to him...such a vile fellow our devar sa is...😡...through out that incident I was getting a very creepy sort of vibe...I was cursing swara for her stupidity and just like her I felt relief wash over me when I sanskaar come over...😃...swasan moment near the rides were so awww...I was literally grinning like a Cheshire cat...

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey there! Did you tell me your name before? If you did, I apologise for forgetting and if you don't mind, please remind me so I can acknowledge your comments properly 😳. Thank you so much for liking the first part, I'm already doing the ground work for the next part so really want it up tomorrow!

Hey,

Sorry, I haven't really introduced myself. My name's Vrinda, I prefer to go by just V. Joined the forum just two weeks back. Really loving all the fanfictions uploaded here. You've written some really wonderful stuff. Love your writing style. Please keep writing. And thanks for the PM. :)

-V

Its so amazing Shruti.. Lovely.. I was visualising the scenes.. Continue dear..Btw I was planning to go Milenium Park today.. Mujhe to aj waha pe charo taraf SwaSan hi najar aayenge re..

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Ah Saku, you are a true sweetheart 🤗 Itna excitement sirf meri rambling ke liye?😆 The show is so annoying in not following logical plot routes, i give up. Really pleased you liked the simple Park romance. I'm working on Part 2. Oh and I know I have to read your updates too, which I promise I will- bit mad at the moment! Lots of love

Originally posted by: The-Heart

Wonderful story line, i hope one day CVs will show these kind of scenes in show

Swasan moments are very cute😳 and glad swara started doubting the cunning ragini.

Eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: kaku17

Shruti my dear...🤗

loved it...especially when sanskaar yanked lakshya's hand from swara's... 😈...was really wishing sanskaar to give a solid punch to him...such a vile fellow our devar sa is...😡...through out that incident I was getting a very creepy sort of vibe...I was cursing swara for her stupidity and just like her I felt relief wash over me when I sanskaar come over...😃...swasan moment near the rides were so awww...I was literally grinning like a Cheshire cat...

am waiting eagerly for the next update to see how the story progresses...Ragya duo give me creeps...and tbh more than ragini, its lakshya who scares me now a days...and I am worried as to what ragini is now going to feed in to lakshya's brain and the aftermath...me worried for swasan...😭...but then when sanskaar is there why worry 😉...what a clever guy he is...posted detectives to keep an eye on swara for her welfare...😃..

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Hey,

Sorry, I haven't really introduced myself. My name's Vrinda, I prefer to go by just V. Joined the forum just two weeks back. Really loving all the fanfictions uploaded here. You've written some really wonderful stuff. Love your writing style. Please keep writing. And thanks for the PM. :)

-V