Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Purbishona
Its so amazing Shruti.. Lovely.. I was visualising the scenes.. Continue dear..Btw I was planning to go Milenium Park today.. Mujhe to aj waha pe charo taraf SwaSan hi najar aayenge re..

Pure 🤗

You live in Kolkata?! How funny re Millennium Park- I have never visited K, I owe my research to the internet! I have a question, I'll PM you- you will be able to help me with something for my next part- yayyy! Thanks for your kind comments as ever Purbi x

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Shruti towards the end of second part I literally wanted to cry...
This part was as emotional as can be... I was literally feeling so bad for both Swara as well as Sanskaar and even Annapoorna even though she was the keykei here...
And ya not to forget even Sanskaar's a human there's a limit to which he can conceal his feelings (the serial wala Sanskaar seems like a superman)
Feeling so bad for Swara because everyone is pushing her in the direction she wants to avoid but maybe the force is too much for her to push past...
Waiting eagerly for the next part

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Zaalima_5

@Zaalima_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

shruti loved both parts..😊

AP is blackmailing sanky..😭 kya yaar wo jhoot to sach tha na..😉
in mahasangam episode he filled swara's maang... so he didn't lie..😊

anyways i cried after reading this..😭

waiting for next part...😃

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Eeep.😕

Dark part.

Shrutu🤗,

That demon unfurling in Sanskaar's chest was bound to happen. It was so sweet until she was cuddling the toy...and he was teasing her. Lakshya felt like a dark cloud...and the sun went in.🤢

AP sounds like an irritating grannyma with her strange request. Huh. Drop your BS lady, and just say that you will give ur spoilt brat the toy he wants. Of course after Lakshya's creepy drama...dunno what else a mother would have done.

I don't want to waste my time on lakshya...we share the same views about what we'd like to do to guys who cut their wrist for their love.😡 Where is your other hand Pal...and I have the knife.🤢

The bed scene was very well executed Shrutu, how Swara felt her depressed state disappear when she felt his care...and how Sanskaar despite everything his mind has been putting him through because of the poisonous fear that Swara after all may still have seeds of love in her heart for L,his heart knows..and is fighting with his senses. Turbulence was spot on.👏

Continue soon.

Love--

Medha.

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Indrani

@indrani7495

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Amazing...love the way u potray all d emotions so well with ur writing...👏...!!! Waiting eagerly for the next part!!

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misaki

@misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

AP!!😡😡😡

Gosh ! I hate the "kaikeyis". They manage to betray the very people that they claim to love the most! --______--

I love how you got the promise of Annapurna to not forgive him for his "jhoota Kasam" into picture here. Now I'm seriously dreading this happening on the show.😵 Sanskaar's accepatance and forbearance in that part was wonderfully brought out. The comparison of Sankaar and Annapurna to Ram and Kaikeyi was so darn beautiful. I love how you always manage to make me realize the obvious. I can't believe I never thought of it before.😕

I literally have tears in my eyes after reading the last part Shru!. That was so brilliant👏 I guess it's become a routine of sorts for you to hear this from me though.😆

I love how you have used the current scenario in the show to weave your own story around it. Honestly, I cannot stand watching Swara cause so much pain to Sanskaar. I don't know if its childish to think this way, but I really despise girls who cannot see how they are constantly a cause of a a guy's agony and still cannot bring themselves to confess and make their lives easier. Seriously! It's that simple. You know the guy loves you and you have started to love him that way too. So why can't you just confess to at least liking the guy?!*facepalm* They make me furious! Which is also why I cannot stand Bela from Twilight or Elena from Vampire Diaries(The show). Swara is such a naive and ridiculously dense person on the show that it makes me want to literally smack some sense into her. Gah!

Anyways, before I go way off topic, I wanted you to know that I'm desperately waiting for the next part. Shru I know it can be sometimes difficult to keep your promises on updates, but please do post the next one tomorrow. I really cannot wait for much longer to know how Swara rejects Laksh" ji" and finally put our guy out of his misery.😭

I really can't make myself got through the torture of having to watch the show with you-know-who being a complete bonehead. It's ridiculous that I can't even call him names out here now. So this is the only thing that keeps me going. Thanks to you guys for being such wonderful and gifted writers. Thank you for this one Shru. 🤗🤗

Edited by misaki - 9 years ago

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Silpa

@iam-in-love

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

pt2 is jst wndrful... was Waiting for ur update.

Wts d problem of Laksh if SwaSan spend time together 😡 who d hell r he is question Swara about it 😡 . Really fedup with RagLak...

And yes , thr is a limit for evrythng. Wt ever sanskar said to swara is true. Whn she is going to understand it ?

And Lakshs suicide attempt... Someone call police, bcoz I think , suicide attempt is a crime .

"Lekin harr koi beta Raam nahi bann sakta , ye Kaikeyi bhi jaanti hai" I loved dis...

And... Dnt forget to gave a SwaSan kissing scene... 😊

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: manasie23
Shruti towards the end of second part I literally wanted to cry...
This part was as emotional as can be... I was literally feeling so bad for both Swara as well as Sanskaar and even Annapoorna even though she was the keykei here...
And ya not to forget even Sanskaar's a human there's a limit to which he can conceal his feelings (the serial wala Sanskaar seems like a superman)
Feeling so bad for Swara because everyone is pushing her in the direction she wants to avoid but maybe the force is too much for her to push past...
Waiting eagerly for the next part

Manu 🤗

Tenu ruladiya? Sorry love! I will make it better but there is more sad to come before I can fix it- sorry! Yes, I'm trying to make this Swara show some sense at least and I wanted to bring out how you can't blame Sanskaar for MUing her feelings, anyone would! Will start working on next part now:)

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Ramya

@The-Heart

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Second part is very emotional, AP started emotional blackmailing, feeling bad for sanskar😭

and his dialogue rocks "Maafi kaisi Maa? Kaushaliya ho ya Kaikeyi, Maa toh Maa hi hoti hai na?" 👏

Waiting for next update

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: kulsum_5
shruti loved both parts..😊

AP is blackmailing sanky..😭 kya yaar wo jhoot to sach tha na..😉
in mahasangam episode he filled swara's maang... so he didn't lie..😊

anyways i cried after reading this..😭

waiting for next part...😃

Thank you Kulsum and so sorry for making you cry sweetie 🤗

Arrey na, he did lie and admitted na? Basically the wording used was did you have a fake marriage? And she clearly asked about when he brought her in the house first so yes he did lie in that sense but trust the woman to hold it over him! New part being worked on:) Just decided title.

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