Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love
Res...
I cant help myself... I was supposed to study and I am bhataking here..

unresing..
Ok.. part 1 is just so amazing... Your descriptions as usual are eloborated. Its like I can see the whole thing happening in front of my eyes. RagLak are upto no good... damn them... I know by the end I will loath of them...
Coming to SwaSan...these babies are so adorable... Hehehehe... Swara having inappropriate thoughts after sharing bed for first time with dear hubby... You go girl.. 😆 Awww... loved the way how her days are measured up by how much time she spend with Sanskaar... its truly adorable...I am glad Swara is able to see the malice in Ragini's eyes... I hope wo Laksh par bhi zyada trust na kare... What a entry by Sanskaar... Loved the way he removed Laksh hand from Swara's arm.. and Laksh ..less said about him is better... the guy say quite so much saying bhai ..bhai... Swara distracting Sanskaar with her talks was so adorable.. and their first unofficial date... me loving it... The cotton candy scene... I told u before ..I love building up romance scene.. This what I liked very much... hayyeee ..I hope such a scene is shown in show too... The storm is coming na... RagLak seems like trouble to me... eagerly waiting for next part... This was so good that I couldnt stop from commenting... :-P

Nitzy meri jaan 🤗

Honestly, you have made me grin ear to ear, like Swara was when she saw Sanskaar! Your comments will ensure I sleep relieved and happy. I am so currently frustrated with the way the track is progressing, so many gaps and how stupid can they make Swara. Hence I wanted her naive and gullible but not stupid. RagLak- yeah you won't like them by the end for sure especially one of them! And there's another one you won't like- you will see in the next part 😉.

I am ever greedy for SwaSan romance- they never showed us any dinners, dancing, simple dates so I have been desperate to write one for ages. I'm so happy you like the "hand removal" scene- simple but makes a statement in Sanskaar style I thought. Love you for the comments and hope will get more tomorrow! Good night xoxo

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Shrutu🤗,

I woke up...and saw this was ready. Breakfast. Yum.😛

That dedication touched me so much that I cannot even make a joke about it today. Of course, it may be because my sleep cobwebs have not been dusted yet.😃.

I read the entire part, wishing along with Swara...and waiting for Sanskaar to come. Hated the creepy aura which the RagYa duo give off in wafts nowadays. Good job bringing that out.👏

I felt the murky vibes disappear as soon as I spied Sanskaar there.😊

Sheepish Swara...justifying her readiness in trusting the creepy duo.🤢 Sanky's cautious approach.⭐️

Removing lakshya's hand from her."Meri patni hai..dur se Laksh" ahahaha feels.😳

But best was obviously the arm locking part and the way he indulged her.."aur aapko madam vahan toh jana hi hoga nah?" 😳 awww.

They are becoming a chirpy couple.and swara is so happy and free with him.Bed wall demolision🥳 ye ladki toh fas gayi😉

I know those games. Never even won a bunny rabbit.😭

I was delighted with this part. I adore your writing as always. Continue soon...and no, I am not hitting ya with the belan today.😃

Love--

Medha.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

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Originally posted by: medhasankar
Shrutu🤗,

I woke up...and saw this was ready. Breakfast. Yum.😛
That dedication touched me so much that I cannot even make a joke about it today. Of course, it may be because my sleep cobwebs have not been dusted yet.😃.

I read the entire part, wishing along with Swara...and waiting for Sanskaar to come. Hated the creepy aura which the RagYa duo give off in wafts nowadays. Good job bringing that out.👏

I felt the murky vibes disappear as soon as I spied Sanskaar there.😊
Sheepish Swara...justifying her readiness in trusting the creepy duo.🤢 Sanky's cautious approach.⭐️

But best was obviously the arm locking part and the way he indulged her.."aur aapko madam vahan toh jana hi hoga nah?" 😳 awww.

They are becoming a chirpy couple.and swara is so happy and free with him.Bed wall demolision🥳 ye ladki toh fas gayi😉
I know those games. Never even won a bunny rabbit.😭

I was delighted with this part. I adore your writing as always. Continue soon...and no, I am not hitting ya with the belan today.😃😉

Love--
Medha.

Yayyy!!! You've read it before I went to sleep (1.36 am here and this madam is still quite awake! 😲). 🤗 Phew, sleep cobwebs save from belan- tip to store for next time 😆. I seriously mean the dedication, I don't usually like soppy but this is 100% sincere so I allow myself.

Oh, glad the creepiness comes off- they both are a piece of work and Ragini is totally turned full scale psycho so as you know 😉 it will get worse! . So happy the romance bit worked too. I just felt they needed some nice alone time for a change, shame I can't do away with RagYa entirely! Those games - I used to get hooked to win and of course like you say, you can't! Sanskaar the ever practical had the solution of course so lucky Swara- I might drop hints to the hubby but for sure, he will not take them 😆.

Have just started on Part 2 but think I need to stop soon. As it is, tomorrow is gonna be a long day! My sister in law went into labour this afternoon and we are awaiting my nephew or niece so I have to be prepared to wake and be energetic at any hour tomorrow!

Love you always xoxo

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
😉
Yayyy!!! You've read it before I went to sleep (1.36 am here and this madam is still quite awake! 😲). 🤗 Phew, sleep cobwebs save from belan- tip to store for next time 😆. I seriously mean the dedication, I don't usually like soppy but this is 100% sincere so I allow myself.
Oh, glad the creepiness comes off- they both are a piece of work and Ragini is totally turned full scale psycho so as you know 😉 it will get worse! . So happy the romance bit worked too. I just felt they needed some nice alone time for a change, shame I can't do away with RagYa entirely! Those games - I used to get hooked to win and of course like you say, you can't! Sanky the ever practical had the solution of course so lucky Swara- I might drop hints to the hubby but for sure, he will not take them 😆.
Have just started on Part 2 but think I need to stop soon. As it is, tomorrow is gonna be a long day! My sister in law went into labour this afternoon and we are awaiting my nephew or niece so I have to be prepared to wake and be energetic at any hour tomorrow!
Love you always xoxo

Go to sleep.😆 U got a busy day and a busy baby coming Godspeed.🥳

and no..belans don't pause coz of sleep..my jokes do.😆 so u r in danger alright.

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Loved it!

Chalo at least swara doubts ragini now. But, she trusts laksh? IF needs better emos for me to express what i feel abt that 😛 i think by the end of this blasted track i will trust ragini more than laksh.

Though i usually dislike the idea of the hero always coming in at the right time to save the heroine, yaha i will make an exception. Sanskaar coming into the frame in any way is always a welcome sight. I so want them to repeat that "door se laksh, biwi hai meri".

The candy floss moment ☺️ that was just so good!!! I miss having all these simple yet sweet moments on the show.

Laksh: meri nazar hai tumpe 🤣 lakshji bahot mazakiya hai. Usse kya farak padega lakshji? 🤪

Edited by The.Lannister - 9 years ago

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awesome update! Loved how much Swara wanted to get back to Sanskaar and loved their unofficial first date! It was beautiful the way they got lost in each other and created their own world...

Ragini and Lakshya are going to cause trouble soon, aren't they? I hope SwaSan will be fine!

Waiting very eagerly for the rest of the fic.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Loved it!
Chalo at least swara doubts ragini now. But, she trusts laksh? IF needs better emos for me to express what i feel abt that 😛 i think by the end of this blasted track i will trust ragini more than laksh.

Though i usually dislike the idea of the hero always coming in at the right time to save the heroine, yaha i will make an exception. Sanskaar coming into the frame in any way is always a welcome sight. I so want them to repeat that "door se laksh, biwi hai meri".

The candy floss moment ☺️ that was just so good!!! I miss having all these simple yet sweet moments on the show.

Laksh: meri nazar hai tumpe 🤣 lakshji bahot mazakiya hai. Usse kya farak padega lakshji? 🤪

Shruti 🤗

Glad you are liking it so far. Haha- see I am in such a dilemma all around. I can't suddenly credit Swara devi with total sense all of a sudden. I'd love to make Lakshya the bigger villain but I can't bring myself to credit him with what that takes either. I deliberately used the word disdain for him through Ragini:). And yesss!!! You gave me exactly the reaction I wanted with the "meri nazar hai tumpe" bit- 🤣. Even Ragini just smiled her fake smile. She knows full well he won't be able to do a thing!

And I so would have used a "door se" line if they hadn't already done that in the show- it is one of my all time fave moments! Made me fidah over Sanskaar straightaway! Yes, I went for the timely entry as I was getting irritated with Lucky just writing that scene of him putting his hand on her 😆.

Thank you Shruti! x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Awesome update! Loved how much Swara wanted to get back to Sanskaar and loved their unofficial first date! It was beautiful the way they got lost in each other and created their own world...
Ragini and Lakshya are going to cause trouble soon, aren't they? I hope SwaSan will be fine!
Waiting very eagerly for the rest of the fic.

Hey Sapna! Thanks so much for the prompt read and lovely words. Glad you liked it. Yes, unofficial first date indeed! Ugh- yes, RagYa unfortunately will not make pretty reading but I will try to minimise the pain as much as I can, just the recent track brought out quite a bit of angst in me again . Catch you soon hopefully.