Redemption: A Swara/Sanskaar & Ragini Story [Pt10-Pg33]

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Porkalai

@Porkalai22

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#121

awsm...
wants more raglak moments plz...

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naina

@neelzzz

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#122

yr lykng man in blue less and less

ragini shuld gain some self confidence warne sale bechari ko kacha chaba jayenge

bechari ko kuch yad bhi nhi h...c is such an angel...

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kaku17

@kaku17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Oh dear. ..Ragini's dread when she hears she has to move to maheshwari mansion was so touching. ...I just wanted to hug her n say things would soon be alright. ..just hv faith n stay put...

lovely. ..though filler but still a beautiful read...thnx for the pm n do update soon. .

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foresight

@foresight

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

I so wish they had moved the track in this direction. really good update. waiting for the next one 😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

I can almost feel Ragini's pain here, of entering a household where you know everyone hates you is the most heartbreaking, especially when you don't know the reason of their resentment!

Will Lakshya ever see beyond his wounds to the wounded soul his wife is now? Or will he continue to punish her for something she clearly doesn't remember? Does he have enough compassion left in him after what he's been through?

Swara's turmoil on her relationship with Sanskar is justified too, she has grown fond of him, is closer to him yes, but in terms of romance she had never known him.

I like you pace and flow, do continue soon!

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arathy

@sarathy321

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Superb update. ..
Waiting for swasan moments. ...

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

thanks 4 pm...m excited to read the next chap...like swasan and ragini bonding

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Miracle_sweet

@Miracle_sweet

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

I loved this part to bits!!!

And I am really happy that I can like Ragini, feel sorry for her, empathise with her! And I'm glad you brought out the fact that no one is innocent. Honestly, along with pre-memory loss ragini, I blame Dadi and Shekhar the most when it comes to what she has done! (But if I begin talking about that then this will become an essay :P)

I can't wait to see how you proceed with Swasan's story!!!

Keep updating!
Mihika

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#129

I absolutely love this FF and I love how you preseve the personalities of the characters! I continue to love the Ragini in this and you make me long for that day in the future when Ragini will be redeemed and made positive.

Lakshya is going to come to regret his actions and I can foresee a very long and hard road ahead of him to gain forgiveness! I hope he will not make his situation worse in the next chapters!

I loved how Swara referred to the bedroom as 'their' room and I am very eagerly looking forward to see how they will deal with their sleeping arrangements what their decision of giving their marriage a chance. I am hoping for a mischievous and flirty Sanskaar who is pulling Swara's leg!

I am eagerly awaiting the next update and continue soon, please.