Redemption: A Swara/Sanskaar & Ragini Story [Pt10-Pg33]

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Ally

@Allyson

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: neelzzz
aswm update already cant w8 4 nxt update

f9ly swara sanskar r together

ab bechara laksh na swara h na ragini

bcoz agar laksh redeem ho v gya ragini man in blue ko itni jaldi pasand kya baat bhi nhi krne wali

plz plz plz laksh ko ragini prem rog laga do

Thanks for your feedback!

Prem rog is a good idea. Lets see how that would play out.

Quote

Ally

@Allyson

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Well written
Swara sanskaar scenes was emotional
Wow...raginis emotions...fear, worries , love and care for her sister...all protrayed well..
Hope u will continue soon

Thank you for your feedback :)

I am glad that you are receptive to Ragini. It was my biggest worry when starting this story; the ability to humanize her and make her a little more relatable.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Ally

@Allyson

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hi Ally

Very well written update. I liked the SwaSan interaction a lot. So like Sanskaar, to give Swara the time and space needed to ensure she made the right decision.

Now Ragini and Lakshya have to stay together for nearly 5 months. 😊 Does Lakshya in your story know yet that Swara wants to genuinely stay in her marriage with Sanskaar...not for any project of reuniting Ragini and him, but just for her and Sanskaar?

Thank you Viji. I am glad to see you enjoying this.

Lakshya isn't aware yet about Swara and Sanskaar's agreement. That will be something made clear to him in the near future I would say.

Quote

Ally

@Allyson

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Sakura24
I really like this more with each chapter. You had to take that 6 months approach as it is the formality, I was waiting for this. So Ragini and Lakshya still has 6 months in which perhaps they might solve their differences and start over. hmmm interesting! Then SwaSan, I have nothing but praises at the way you handled them here. So mature and deeply loving their bond is. I love the way Swara stayed firm on her decision and Sanskar wanted to give her time. That's so typical SwaSan!
Then Ragini, she's as always the absolute darling!

Continue soon!

I desperately tried to see some way around the 6-month approach. I find many many TV-show using it as a crutch and it was something I wished not to use myself. But this was the only way for the memory-loss to progress and still have Swara and Sanskaar moving forward.

Thank you for your continued support and your lovely words of encouragement

Quote

Ally

@Allyson

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: foresight
i really loved the swasan interaction...and was glad to see that swara understood what sanskar was feeling without having to say it...continue to love this ragini. wonder if the one is the show would have been like her if she had been allowed to meet laksh on her own without the marriage sword and everyone telling her he was the one.

don't know if i want this laksh to be forgiven though, i would love for this ragini to find someone who values her for who she is.

That is an interesting notion you have regarding Ragini.

From the start of the serial Ragini was told that Lakshya is 'hers'. He was her fianc that proclaimed that though he was bad he would change for her (every girl's fantasy) and that Swara (the enemy daughter) was just trying to butt into her happiness.

And then the world goes flip-side-up and Lakshya actually 'changes', but for Swara and Swara ins't an enemy, but a sibling. I can see how all this might mess with someone's psyche and perception.

Possibly if she had been with Swara when Lakshya had first been introduced she would have disliked him as much as Swara initially had.

You really gave me some food for thought there