Redemption: A Swara/Sanskaar & Ragini Story [Pt10-Pg33]

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Annei123
Awesome update!!!!
Plzzz give next part soon 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: abika
Loved it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: ck1234
nice,plz focus more on Ragini and introduce a new hero for her.

I am not sure about a new character just yet. I would first like to sort out the tangled mess that is the Maheshwari house at this point. There is currently a lot going on there.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: princess_tara
awesome update

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Porkalai2892
awsm...
wants more raglak moments plz...

Their moments will be coming up, but probably not as you expect.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: neelzzz
yr lykng man in blue less and less
ragini shuld gain some self confidence warne sale bechari ko kacha chaba jayenge

bechari ko kuch yad bhi nhi h...c is such an angel...

Well now that Ragini is away from her oppressive family members she might just get a chance to blossom and actually grow a backbone. Lets see what the future holds.

As for Lakshya, lets not forget all the lying and manipulating that Ragini did. She took away his love. I think a little hate is justified.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: kaku17
Oh dear. ..Ragini's dread when she hears she has to move to maheshwari mansion was so touching. ...I just wanted to hug her n say things would soon be alright. ..just hv faith n stay put...

lovely. ..though filler but still a beautiful read...thnx for the pm n do update soon. .

Thank you for your encouraging words. I was nervous about starting a story with basically Ragini as the lead but it makes me so happy to see the acceptance of her.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: foresight
I so wish they had moved the track in this direction. really good update. waiting for the next one 😃

Right?

There was so much potential here.

You really lost out creatives.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Sakura24
I can almost feel Ragini's pain here, of entering a household where you know everyone hates you is the most heartbreaking, especially when you don't know the reason of their resentment!
Will Lakshya ever see beyond his wounds to the wounded soul his wife is now? Or will he continue to punish her for something she clearly doesn't remember? Does he have enough compassion left in him after what he's been through?

Swara's turmoil on her relationship with Sanskar is justified too, she has grown fond of him, is closer to him yes, but in terms of romance she had never known him.

I like you pace and flow, do continue soon!

See I also don't blame Lakshya for this. He was lid to so well and manipulated so perfectly last time, of course he is once bitten, twice shy. I will say though that in regards to them, things will get a little worse before they get better.

I actually really hated the Swara bit I wrote, but at that point, I was just desperate to post the update and get it out of the way.

Thank you so very much for your continued support.