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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hi! Viji😊

Can't type much I'm literally trembling in excitement. Who the bad guy gonna be? Please, update the last part soon. The first two parts are so very mind blowing. You should have not doubted yourself on the first place, your suspense writing is as charming as the romantic ones. I'm already blown off.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ashakalyani
i was eagerly waiting for ur new story..thanku for dis...looking forward to future updates

Thanks dear. I've updated all the 3 parts now. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: bwvianna
You're writing continues to surprise me everytime I read a new story you write. Completely blown away by this one too. Damn good concept and emotion portrayal! You have a talent for describing things. Keep writing. I can't wait for an update!!! Please update this soon.

-V

Thanks very much dear. I've updated all the 3 parts. Do read fully and let me know what you think. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Hi! Viji😊
Can't type much I'm literally trembling in excitement. Who the bad guy gonna be? Please, update the last part soon. The first two parts are so very mind blowing. You should have not doubted yourself on the first place, your suspense writing is as charming as the romantic ones. I'm already blown off.

Thanks Saku dear. Updated! Do read and let me know what you felt. The bad guy/ gal is revealed in the last part! 😊

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nissi or jesi

@Jess_Ru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

just read part 1 amazing yaar par have to eat so going will edit again one thing i would like to say just like ur name ur writings are unique❤️

read all the parts amazing loved swara realisation i was😆when swara sprayed pepper spray on laks deserves it dat creepo take a bow dear hats off

Edited by Messi2 - 9 years ago

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

OK I am in office & had thought I will just read the first part. Then saw the second part was updated so thought OK will read this & stop. And then of course there was just one left, so why leave it incomplete?😆 The story was that good. Hard to stop reading even when I have a pile of pending work next to me😳

@Part1: That quote from Agatha Christie is a perfect start to this story in a way that it opens as well as closes this story. I loved the description of the night & the person lurking around MM. It felt right out of a horror novel! I loved the line about them being in a deadlock, they needed a push, and like in the show here as well it has to be luxji😆

@Part2: Awwieee😳 How cute were they together😳 First Shruti in her OS yesterday, then now you☺️

@Part3: I really didnt expect it to be Lux. Though who else could it have been?! Not Annapurna, though I know many people think it will be her in the show. The way you described Lux made me shiver. Kudos to Swara for her presence of mind. I liked that the handsome hero didnt come to the heroine's rescue. The heroine managed to do it herself. And then I loved it how he had already taken care of her safety in his absence. Just perfect.

Too good Viji. And thanks for updating this in one go. You know how difficult it is to wait for the suspense to unravel in any suspense novel. 😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: The.Lannister
OK I am in office & had thought I will just read the first part. Then saw the second part was updated so thought OK will read this & stop. And then of course there was just one left, so why leave it incomplete?😆 The story was that good. Hard to stop reading even when I have a pile of pending work next to me😳

@Part1: That quote from Agatha Christie is a perfect start to this story in a way that it opens as well as closes this story. I loved the description of the night & the person lurking around MM. It felt right out of a horror novel! I loved the line about them being in a deadlock, they needed a push, and like in the show here as well it has to be luxji😆

@Part2: Awwieee😳 How cute were they together😳 First Shruti in her OS yesterday, then now you☺️

@Part3: I really didnt expect it to be Lux. Though who else could it have been?! Not Annapurna, though I know many people think it will be her in the show. The way you described Lux made me shiver. Kudos to Swara for her presence of mind. I liked that the handsome hero didnt come to the heroine's rescue. The heroine managed to do it herself. And then I loved it how he had already taken care of her safety in his absence. Just perfect.

Too good Viji. And thanks for updating this in one go. You know how difficult it is to wait for the suspense to unravel in any suspense novel. 😳

Thanks so much Shruti my dear. 😊 The first time I am attempting writing something in this genre, so I am really glad you liked it. I was going to PM you, when I saw that you'd already liked the posts. 😉

Part 2: well...its SwaSan after all. 😳 ☺️ Brings out all the romance and errmmm...seductive? writings! 😆

Part 3: Oh yeah, I get what you mean, I wanted to show Swara strong and fighting her way out of there. And thoughtful of Sansku to have arranged the police backup. 😉 He is not Sansku for nothing!

Thanks again for your comment, Shruti. Made my day!

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

With the way lux is now acting i think your story might be right explanation for his behaviour.

As always you have written an absolutly wonderful piece my dear.

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Robia Yousaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

read all 3 parts and its just mind blowing.amazing and fabulous thanks for the PM but i already read it

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Messi2
just read part 1 amazing yaar par have to eat so going will edit again one thing i would like to say just like ur name ur writings are unique❤️
read all the parts amazing loved swara realisation i was😆when swara sprayed pepper spray on laks deserves it dat creepo take a bow dear hats off

Thanks so much dear. 🤗 Glad you liked it.

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