SwaSan TS: 'Old Sins Cast Long Shadows' - Page 3

Originally posted by: Ardhikian

That was unbelievable. my god, like a potential thriller movie. Action, drama, romance, everything! 😛
I am SO in love with your writing style, Viji. And trust me, even before I saw the Pm I'd read your story. Because i keep waiting for them.
The way you portrayed Sanskaar and Swara's relation from here, from what we're seeing now, to the very end, where the conspirator was rightly punished for his sins, I have just one word. WOW. It was pure entertainment and nothing else. I could feel Swara's fear, Lakshya madness and Sanskaar's grief when he found out about Kavita being killed by Lucky. I am still in your story, not able to pull my mind out.
Anyway, hands down incredible. 👏
PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON

Originally posted by: swa291

With the way lux is now acting i think your story might be right explanation for his behaviour.

As always you have written an absolutly wonderful piece my dear.

Originally posted by: Kushimian89

read all 3 parts and its just mind blowing.amazing and fabulous thanks for the PM but i already read it

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

this was awesome brilliant ts jst amazing thanx viji for d pm

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Viji🤗,

First of all thanks for that incredible dedication. I have to tell you I read it thrice..and then after I finished the entire 3shot..I went back and read it again.😉 Self obsessed me! I am glad my words could help this one out of your computer screen and into the forum. in Ragini's words, your work would otherwise say 'Aap hamare saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain?'😆

@1st part: I loved the element of mystery in it. Agatha Christie is like my staple diet...so that quote was a pleasant surprise.

I loved the mysterious night air blowing all around and the shroud of evil approaching. Creepily done..and thats a compliment.😉

I have seen this AP before from you...although this version is a bit mellower. I love how her utterly different Devrani-Jethani relationship with Suju is explored a bit.😊

@2nd Part: I adored the slow exploration of romantic feelings budding and moving towards the complete flowering.😊 I deeply admire how your characters never are in a lot of hurry. Its believable.😃 The missing-my-hubby-worried-to-bits Swara was enjoyable.😈 Most of all I liked how swara accepted him as the Husband in its true sense. A male presence who would love, nurture and guard in equal measure. Not just a friendly companion..😃

@3rd part: It became apparent by the time when you mentioned that letter in Sanky's writing...and how Laksh 'slunk away'...that he was going rogue. I am glad that u gave him a basis of illness to fall back upon...although I would genuinely have wished Sanky to have pumelled him a bit more than what he did.😡. By process of elimination..there were only two people who would wish Sanky harm...AP and Laksh. rags or DP or Suju would rather discredit Swara more than Sanky to get revenge of any sort.😳. me Detective.😃

I Dunno if you just overlooked it..but you used another AC quote.😛 Its from the Death on the Nile.

When the sun is out, the moon cannot be seen or something like that. Spoken by Jackie w.r.t Linnet Ridgeway. Well explained attitude towards Kavita falling for Sanky.

I loved how intimidating the sly Laksh sounded when Swara confronted him Its symbolic in a way..ending any chance of reconciliation between them for whatever reason, even if she was not madly in love with Sanky.

I might as well stop before I analyse any more. Lovely 3shot...and as always written beautifully.

Love--

Medha.

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

I loved the whole story...I read it in one go. It's well written and the suspense is captured well though i did gauge it was Laksh starting part 3.

Congratulations on another well written story and your first suspense one 😊