SwaSan TS: 'Old Sins Cast Long Shadows' - Page 5

Originally posted by: aash2302

Awesome story!!!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Well Written TS..

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

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Unres my cmnt in pg 2

once again thnk u so much for such an awsm SwaSan TS

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This was just super duper mega hit...👏👏👏👏👏
Oh my god..!! I have no words to describe this TS yaar Viji..🤗
I am super excited after reading this..The adrenaline rush is still felt inside me, I cant just compose myself..😲
I never doubted it was Lakshya who was the dangerous stalker..I just scoffed his weak nature after going away meekly after Sanskaar hit him twice in the start..😆
I had my doubts on AP though, she is a powerful character with shades of Grey, in your 'Elements' series..And you seemed to be very much captured by her regal aura..That made me doubt her..Since the villian always have to be powerful.
But man..Lakshya..!!! he sent shivers down my spine, when he revealed himself in front of Swara at the farm house.
I had guessed earlier that it could be him forging Sanskaar's handwriting, since I remembered Sanskar's recollections about their childhood..But he could be villainous to the extent that he killed Kavita and was going to harm Swara.😲😲
Anyways, I loved Sanskaar's heroic entry to rescue his wife..Loved the way he did everything to protect her..👏⭐️
Awesome work dear Viji..Love you and your works very much..🤗

And I forgot to mention one more thing..😉

The romance between them was awesome..❤️☺️
and the part I loved the most was when they came down the stairs glancing at each other shyly..😳😳
and everyone staring at them curiously😃 How I wish the same happens in our show
Since it was a three shot, my whole concentration seemed to be on the climax part..😃

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Thanks very much dear. I've updated all the 3 parts. Do read fully and let me know what you think. 😊</font>

Read all the parts now!! Fabulous work! I had thought maybe it was Parineeta Or Ram Prasad. Lakshya was sort of unexpected, but it was damn thrilling! You've got this incredible way of writing that literally takes a person into your story. I could completely imagine everything. I have read all your other works as well. They are such good reads! You're genre transition was nothing to fear about. You did splendidly. :)

Please keep writing. Eagerly awaiting the 'before Diwali light OS'.
-V

Originally posted by: iam-in-love

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wowww... Its jst awsm story... SanLak fight... Thn Sanskar leaving d house. Swara was in tension. And she luking her mehendi.
And Loved SwaSan's kiss ❤️
Sanskar gaving her things which she can use for her protection... He is such a caring husband..
I really cnt belive that Luxji is behind it all. I hate him.He is d one who is killed Kavita&nw tried to kill swara.
Thnk god that Sanskar arranged the policemen to look over his wife & make sure she is fyn...
SwaSan... ❤️

TS was jst awsm... U r an excellent writter... The way how u describing each&evrything very clearly is jst beautyful... Loved it vry much... Pls pm me in ur future stories... 😊

Viji, mindblowing 👏
I personally love intriguing stories with lots of suspense till the end 😳😆
Sheer brilliance. It was like reading a book, suspense, romance ☺️ Everything was there.
The initial quote was really beautiful and the whole part was very nicely described.
The second part ☺️ Ohmygod, so so so beautiful ❤️ Their feelings were brilliantly described. You left me speechless.
The 3rd part, left me quite shocked. I'm very honest i never expected Laksh to be Kavita's murderer 😲 I had a doubt on Sujata at the beginning, but i was wrong. This came as a surprise to me. You maintained the suspense element till the end, well done 👏 This might happen in the serial as well 😉 Laksh is turning into an obsessive lover, so i won't be shocked to know that actually he was the one who killed Kavita 😆
Swara and Laksh's confrontation gave me goose bumps. He really needed a psychiatrist.
The whole TS was simply outstanding and a special thanks to Medha for convincing you to post this, otherwise we would't read this masterpiece 🤗

Originally posted by: iam-in-love

Unres my cmnt in pg 2

once again thnk u so much for such an awsm SwaSan TS

PM me whn u update New SwaSan stories