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Oh Wow! What a beautiful piece Shruti! You have really done a remarkable job with this one. Just when I feel I've read your best work, you surprise with something even better. I'm sure I'm not the only one to feel this way.I love how you showed Swara analyzing things from all angles, but most importantly, considering her feelings for a change. Even though she was in the dark about what would happen with Sanskaar himself, I'm glad she realized her mistakes and was honest enough to admit that if he was leaving her, it was a punishment she truly deserved. I'm glad she understood the impact and gravity of her earlier words and actions with Sanskaar to the point where she momentarily believed her realization came too late and she had probably lost him and her one shot at real love and happiness forever.This is the kind of Swara I would love to see and I'm still not giving up on the CVs eventually seeing some sense and redeeming her. To be honest, of all characters in the show, she needs redeeming most.Keep up the fabulous work! 😃
Jean 🤗
What can I say? I'm so touched today by your lovely words on various pieces I am all 😳. Very grateful so thank you!
Glad you liked this one- I genuinely think the Swara we all love is sensible. Even if she can be a bit dense, we don't need to see stupidity to the level we are seeing at the moment and I wanted to write one where I thought she would sensibly explore her feelings and behave as per them. And yes in every one I write, I do try to make Swara acknowledge her errors as I think she has made so many and Sanskaar deserves her regret. Thanks again xoxo
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