Undone- A SwaSan TS- The Comprehension Series, Part 3 (Final) - Page 5

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

beautifully written

Originally posted by: princess_tara

awesome

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shruti a big hug from my side to you for this marvellous piece of writing 🤗
As i always said you are so good at describing the inner feelings and turmoil of every character in your story 👏
This separation was needed for both of them, but especially Swara. Sometimes distance lets you know who is worth keeping, and who is not 😳
Swara was finally able to declare her love to Sanskar❤️ And Sanskar ne sahi kaha, his trip and distance made her realize how much Sanskar mean to her, to wo pehle hi agar chala jata to yeh sab na hota 😆
You are so talented Shruts, keep writing 😳

Originally posted by: The-Heart

Awesome piece of writing👏

I just love it😳

All 3 parts are simply superb and i like the swasan conversation and way of confession.

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

What a way to end the series! Seriously, it was so so beautiful!

It was a sweet surprise that this chapter didn't start off where the last one concluded. The subdivisions were a great idea and a refreshing way to portray the story. You had me at the edge of my seat after "More of Unravelling" and I started to skim read in desperation to know what Sanskaar had said that made Swara think so sensibly. 😆

Can I say that my fav sub-division is "More of Unthinkable" than the final one? 😳 Purely because it's SO powerful and intense and Swasan just shines in such situations. That outburst from Sanskaar is spectacular. 👏 You wrote it so meticulously, I felt pained reading it.

Kitni baar sabh koh samjaye ke mere patni Lakshya se aise haalaton mein nahi milna chahti, jab mein khudh jaanta hoon ke tum meri patni sirf naam ki ho, aur pyaar toh abhi bhi Lucky se karti hoon.

My heart melted for Sanskaar when I read this. I could totally imagine his being teared apart while saying this. Poor man. He's so going to think this when he sees those stupid photos in the show. 😭 The way he said Nahin hoon tumhara dost and then reminding her that there is also a relation that is of the highest stance between them. I feel like all his frustration, all that heart ache and love he's been suppressing has just poured out in those two sentences. Even in his anger, his concern for Swara was lovely- telling her to concentrate on her life and not to waste it by going after people who are unworthy of it. 👏

I loved seeing Swara in such turmoil. The girl really needs it. Only then will she properly confront her feelings, her intentions, her needs in life. I can only pray we get a Swasan scene like this! Swara is now thinking about what Sanskaar says as shown in recent epis and exactly as you wonderfully penned down, his words might remove the scales from her eyes, baptizing her with the blinding truth.

Swara not giving a toss about RagLak's plans is another reason I loved this division the most! The girl has her priorities straight now- Sanskaar. ❤️ And her confidence that with Sanskaar by her side, she can take on any psycho jodi! 😳 If this isn't romantic, I don't know what is!

And the last division just brings pure joy. 😊

I loved their awkwardness with each other after that little separation. This is such a Swasan thing. ❤️ They were awks on Swasan's first ever night together in MM and also when Swara came back to MM. Cuties. 😆 The way you portrayed their longingness was lovely. 😳 Sanskaar's uncertainty (can't blame him) and Swara's insistence was much needed during Swara's confession. She asks him to read each other's eyes, omd

The kiss! 🥳 🥳 🥳 Swara can now day dream of the real kiss now when her hubby is at work. ☺️ I absolutely adored the way Sanskaar smiled at Swara knowing she is completely and only his. He deserves it and it made me feel sooo happy. I have no idea what I'm gonna do when we're going to see their mutual love track, I'm already a goner reading about it. 🤪

Take a bow, Shruti! 👏⭐️