Undone- A SwaSan TS- The Comprehension Series, Part 3 (Final) - Page 3

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

That was a fitting end to a great series. It gives me so much peace to finally see Sanskaar's love being reciprocated. The devil in me is also pleased to see swara getting all anxious and nervous after sanskaar finally speaks his mind and leaves her alone for a few days. I so agree with the part that raglak can trap her in their plots so easily because they have indirect help from swara herself! That is so true. Also whenever a situation like the upcoming photos drama arrives, we always think about ladki ki izzat. But what about her pati ke embarrassment? I am so glad you addressed that too in your OS. I cannot wait for the day when show swara leaves raglak to deal with their own mess and starts focusing on her own life with sanskaar.

That darcy quote is so sanskaari 😆 he has said the almost exact words in the show too. And somehow in this series they fit swara as well

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

i hv no words...jst read three parts together & i love this...

the journey of swara's realization-u expressed tht very well...

& sanky?aww!i love him...i knw we all love him..how cn he b so perfect...

ha ha!fnaly swra ko akal ayi infact i m sure show mw vi jab tak swara ko push nehi kia jayega wo samjhegi nehi & i thnk ragz will indirectly do tht...

truely swara is needed a push to undrstand sanky's lv & i m waiting 4 tht in the shw...

very beautiful updt..i love swasan's outburst also..thy needed to bring out thr frustration...

love love love it.do write more..

Originally posted by: Sakura24

I'm just so in love with this...you're marvelous Shruti...I don't know how I am going to describe what exactly I'm feeling at the moment but it is so beautiful that I feel a little dizzy with happiness myself and can't find the exact words to praise this work. It is a master piece. :)

Originally posted by: Ardhikian

Loss of words, dear. This is exactly how I imagined it. Plz write more sooon. Love ur work. Pride and Prejudice, that is my favourite line. Love 😃

Originally posted by: medhasankar

I deleted my entire inbox. Had to stalk your posts to find this one out.😕

Shrutu🤗,

I felt like hiding behind the couch when I read the argument portion. Felt like eating chocolate when I read the confession portion...and felt like flying when I read the realisation portion.

Exactly, in future Sanky will go on business trips whenever he needs to manao his wife😃 aise hi maan jayegi. Great idea.😉

I loved how this Swara came off her high horse and firmly told the villain duo to back off. I loved how Sanky firmly told her ki mujhse nahi dekha jaata ki tum apne worthless behen pe life barbaad karo...and showed her finger in the eye...that if she does not harbour feelings for Lucky any longer..and feels anything in the romantic genre for him...then she will have to do something about it. He can't be Friendzoned any more.

Brilliantly written Shruti. Loved the dialogues especially.

Love--

Medha.

PS: and the Darcy quote.😃 Boogie Woogie awesome fit.

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Magical and truly romantic!! No more words. 👏

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

Man Shruti I'm speechless trust me!
This whole series is a masterpiece and u have en carved it with total perfection, beauty and elegance seriously!
Loved it from the core of my heart!
Thank u for this one yaar

Originally posted by: naran1986

Hai..beautiful.My swasan confessed their love in such a sweet way.
beautiful story with a absolutely wonderful and satisfying ending.kudos.

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Perfect ending to a perfect series.
I loved the fact tht only SwaSan were the characters here. U shown other characters in flashback. Throughout SwaSan only.
Plz write more