Heal Me- A SwaSan OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: manasie23

Shru 🤗
Your OS always expresses the layers of Sanskaar character which I think is always ignored in the serial
It always is a treat to read something from his POV. He is somewhat simple and yet complex in his own way.
Here while reading your Oneshot I literally felt so sad for Sanskaar that his mental tensions had started taking a toll on his health. His Tension about the soon to end relationship with Swara and also the compression of his feelings... well as we all know bottling up emotions and feeling is never a good sign for physical health.
But after the Sanksaar stood up for (I hope he does in the serial too) maybe Swara has started to be maybe reslect his feelings and care for him if not resiprocate them to Sanskaar's level.
The way she took care of him 😳

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

Beautiful Shruti!!
Really wish we get to see sumthing lyk this in the show.
Very well written and ur choice of words was Awesome.
The language was perfect
Actually everything was fabulous.
The description of Swara's turmoil and Sanskaar's POV in the start and his elation was very lovely!

Originally posted by: trisha09

girl u rock ...u r a god gifted writer ...and ur words make the scene feel more real the emotions true u hv got an awsome taleent ..god blessu and keep writing more i know dat it sounds odd but i m seriously turning ur fan but yes we r frend so no fan thing shoulkd come between

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

Gud morning Shruthi...

yeasterday ur OS was bedtime story for me...hubby kept telling me to put away my mobile and hence I read the story under my blanket...obedient wifey u see...

clicked a like yesterday but commenting today...

Lovely yaar...how much I now want sanskaar to be down with some fever...pls CVs...let sanskaar have fever...

u know..the serial gives us very little self thought. We get to see self thoughts only on OS and this one is soo warm to heart. I hope the series does give us a detailed falling in love phase...

if its not too much an ask , can u please give us an OS on an outing by Swasan and RagLak...wherein sanskaar gets a confirmation of swara's love for him and raglak get to know they no longer are a part of swasan life..

I love ur language a lot...thanks for the OS dear

Originally posted by: misaki

I'm late again! Hate work😡 My internet was acting super weird yesterday and I was forced to sleep early🤔

Though I hated the fact that I am forced to come here on a weekend was looking forward to getting to the office because of the internet 😆

Getting to the point..😛

I can almost imagine this happening on the show with all the SwaSan-ilicious episodes that we are getting. I can so imagine even the "Swara on the show" doing it. Gosh! My Sanskaar🥺

I absolutely loved the "parched man" reference. This is why I love reading your works. How beautifully you have managed to bring out the vicious circle that Sanskaar has inevitably sentenced himself to.

The last part obviously explained why it was all so worth it. I obviously loooveddd the peck on the forehead and the way it was done. She couldn't help herself and it had been over before she even realized what she was doing. That was such a perfect moment that my heart went AAahhh!.*sigh*...

Swara you idiot! Now you know... It just happens❤️

Shruts 🤗 I really really love reading your works because I feel like you and I both love him the same way ( I know everyone loves him of course but it's not the same.. atleast not in my head😕😆) and the way you get him is so damn perfect .This is my Sanskaar and I am completely and irrevocably in love with him ❤️

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Shruti dearest,

it is a treat to read how Swara's feelings are eventually changing. Although Sanskar is sick, I felt at peace reading this.

I really liked the part where she was thinking how his face looked familiar yet new... it has the right amount of pressure, and the right dose of romantic realization. I enjoyed every other bit too.

Originally posted by: Ardhikian

Awww 😳
Amazing piece of work 😃

Originally posted by: ASRushi

Loved the os. It must have been a blissful smile that adorned Sanskaar's face after the kiss after all who doesn't like to see their love being reciprocated.

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shruti 🤗 You never stop to surprise me 😳
You are so good at describing the feelings of each and every character in your story 👏
I have two fav lines:
'His voice must have sounded a bit heavy or maybe it was his wan face, which raised her antenna.'

Without thinking, almost as if in a trance where only her senses were in control, she leaned over gently and brushed her lips over his forehead. It was the lightest of contacts, like the feel of an ethereal butterfly brushing its wings over your face, momentary and soft.❤️

I loved Swara here, the way she was worried about Sanskar's health and the kiss on the forehead. A simple gesture yet so powerful
Oh my God, you are simply outstanding Shruti🤗

P.S: sorry Shruti i reserved on pag 1 and commented here 😕😲