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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: monsi08
Very nice 👏

Thanks a lot

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Adore this! Love how patni-ish Swara is acting and loved reading about Sanskaar's joy at the end. Do you think we will ever get to see Swara taking care of a sick Sanskaar in the show?

Thank you! Yes, she is so behaving like a wife but pretending she is just friends which I also see happening now on the show! On the show- I so see Swara caring for Sanskaar in the future- my gut instinct says that it will be an injury rather than sickness though

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Shru my dear...on an O.S spree at the moment, huh? 😆 SwaSan really have that effect on one, no? 😉

Well written shot Shru...as usual from you! 😊 I particularly liked the bit about Swara feeling she'd known Sansku forever...and yet, there was something new in the way she was so interested in him, how his presence set her heart aflutter. She is falling...and falling fast! 😳 And as you put so well, she labels this feeling friendship since she's scared of labeling it anything more!

The TLC she gave Sanskaar was too cute. The gentle kiss om his forehead when she thought he was sleeping, and his joy and amazement at that. Now when will these two start kissing each other openly. ☺️

Viji 🤗

Gosh yeah- i seem to be having all this stuff wanting to pour out and am obsessed lol but I know you will totally relate 😉. Glad you like it- thanks hon! Yes that's it- the friendship is a denial tactic but such a transparent one! Ohhh I so want real kissing but in indian shows and that too, a RS one- ?! I don't think we will get that lucky- but at least some steamy sequences hinting at it I'll settle for 😳 Challo, will have to make do creating them ourselves in the meantime 😆

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Viji 🤗
Gosh yeah- i seem to be having all this stuff wanting to pour out and am obsessed lol but I know you will totally relate 😉. Glad you like it- thanks hon! Yes that's it- the friendship is a denial tactic but such a transparent one! Ohhh I so want real kissing but in indian shows and that too, a RS one- ?! I don't think we will get that lucky- but at least some steamy sequences hinting at it I'll settle for 😳 Challo, will have to make do creating them ourselves in the meantime 😆

My dear...I remember we had this discussion on kissing on RS shows, the first time we ever had an exchange, on a thread in the forum 😊 Yup, all we can expect will be some tantalizing camera angles and some nudge-nudge, wink-wink hints. 😛

Still better than the Shammi Kapoor--Sharmila Tagore days of yore where we would have to make do with two flowers nodding against each other!!
😳

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

My dear...I remember we had this discussion on kissing on RS shows, the first time we ever had an exchange, on a thread in the forum 😊 Yup, all we can expect will be some tantalizing camera angles and some nudge-nudge, wink-wink hints. 😛

Still better than the Shammi Kapoor--Sharmila Tagore days of yore where we would have to make do with two flowers nodding against each other!!
😳

OMG- yes! We so did and I remember thinking- aha- another one on my wavelength here! 😃 The flowers nodding used to be seriously epic! 😆 Mind you, nowadays they do show some bold stuff but i think it depends from show to show. I will keep my fingers and toes crossed and see what happens here!

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Nityah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Shruti... 🤗Its so beautiful yaara... just simply beautiful...
Like always I loved the way you delve into character and then pen down their emotions.
You so amazingly described what Sanskaar must be feeling ... To be with one you love the most yet to be not with her... I think for any lover its the sweetest yet horribletorture...You are with your loved one but still you dont have them.. 🤔 Do I make sense... I am confusing myself here actually 🤪😆
Ok... Coming to Swara...her antenna ... it cracked me up yaar... 😆😆 but that scene is so cute.. I can stop smiling after that. Her concern for Sanskaar are very welcomed to see. I think in the show too SwaSan are heading for this place.. My favorite part of this OS are the last two paras... I am a die heart romantic... I enjoy reading passionate kisses and love makings...☺️ But most of all I love to read the unexpected small gestures, touches and kisses. And this is all three of them together. When Swara's emotions took over her senses and she followed her heart and kissed Sanskaar forehead...and after that Sanky opened his eyes when she was on window... I literally swooned. My romantic heart is fluttering reading this... Such a beautiful scene. Kash aisa show me bhi ho...

Btw..I am sorry I still have to comment on your other OS and last 2 letter ..I have read them but I will comment in lesuire where I can appreciate it in fullest.. But all I want to say they are amazing as always especially Sanskaar letter to Swara... 😳😳

With loads of love..
Nityah..😳

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love
Shruti... 🤗Its so beautiful yaara... just simply beautiful...
Like always I loved the way you delve into character and then pen down their emotions.
You so amazingly described what Sanskaar must be feeling ... To be with one you love the most yet to be not with her... I think for any lover its the sweetest yet horribletorture...You are with your loved one but still you dont have them.. 🤔 Do I make sense... I am confusing myself here actually 🤪😆
Ok... Coming to Swara...her antenna ... it cracked me up yaar... 😆😆 but that scene is so cute.. I can stop smiling after that. Her concern for Sanskaar are very welcomed to see. I think in the show too SwaSan are heading for this place.. My favorite part of this OS are the last two paras... I am a die heart romantic... I enjoy reading passionate kisses and love makings...☺️ But most of all I love to read the unexpected small gestures, touches and kisses. And this is all three of them together. When Swara's emotions took over her senses and she followed her heart and kissed Sanskaar forehead...and after that Sanky opened his eyes when she was on window... I literally swooned. My romantic heart is fluttering reading this... Such a beautiful scene. Kash aisa show me bhi ho...

Btw..I am sorry I still have to comment on your other OS and last 2 letter ..I have read them but I will comment in lesuire where I can appreciate it in fullest.. But all I want to say they are amazing as always especially Sanskaar letter to Swara... 😳😳

With loads of love..
Nityah..😳

Nityah my lovely 🤗

I always look forward to your comments and am so grateful for them! So happy you liked it. You totally made sense and this is exactly what I was trying to get across but was not sure whether I made sense! It's this bittersweet thing- you know IPK had an extreme form of it with the "nafrat pass aane na de, mohobbat door jaane na de" but that type of "kashish"? Here it is of course no nafrat (thank God!) but a dilemma still.

Oh yes, totally- I too love the passion, who wouldn't but to me the stuff before it is just as if not more important. I want to show a Swara falling head over heels and not being able to stop herself 😊.

Arrey- no worries hon, take your time, that's so nice of you to say and I'll look forward to the comments whenever you post them xoxo

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Nityah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nityah my lovely 🤗
I always look forward to your comments and am so grateful for them! So happy you liked it. You totally made sense and this is exactly what I was trying to get across but was not sure whether I made sense! It's this bittersweet thing- you know IPK had an extreme form of it with the "nafrat pass aane na de, mohobbat door jaane na de" but that type of "kashish"? Here it is of course no nafrat (thank God!) but a dilemma still.
Oh yes, totally- I too love the passion, who wouldn't but to me the stuff before it is just as if not more important. I want to show a Swara falling head over heels and not being able to stop herself 😊.
Arrey- no worries hon, take your time, that's so nice of you to say and I'll look forward to the comments whenever you post them xoxo

I know about that 'kashish' and I am really glad that SwaSan have their own charisma.. 😳The chances of us getting full on romantic track are very less but really SwaSan have that potential where if their love story is built up slowly... It will be one of the best story which people will remember like Sujal - Kashish, Arnav- Khushi. So true the building up stuff is most important. Thats the part where mine most attention goes. Yay.. I am so looking forward to read what you have planned for Swara... 😳😳😆
I will definitely leave my comment there soon... 😳😃