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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Shru 🤗
Your OS always expresses the layers of Sanskaar character which I think is always ignored in the serial
It always is a treat to read something from his POV. He is somewhat simple and yet complex in his own way.
Here while reading your Oneshot I literally felt so sad for Sanskaar that his mental tensions had started taking a toll on his health. His Tension about the soon to end relationship with Swara and also the compression of his feelings... well as we all know bottling up emotions and feeling is never a good sign for physical health.
But after the Sanksaar stood up for (I hope he does in the serial too) maybe Swara has started to be maybe reslect his feelings and care for him if not resiprocate them to Sanskaar's level.
The way she took care of him 😳

Edited by manasie23 - 9 years ago

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Beautiful Shruti!!
Really wish we get to see sumthing lyk this in the show.
Very well written and ur choice of words was Awesome.
The language was perfect
Actually everything was fabulous.
The description of Swara's turmoil and Sanskaar's POV in the start and his elation was very lovely!

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Tellywoodaddict

@Tellywoodaddict

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

girl u rock ...u r a god gifted writer ...and ur words make the scene feel more real the emotions true u hv got an awsome taleent ..god blessu and keep writing more i know dat it sounds odd but i m seriously turning ur fan but yes we r frend so no fan thing shoulkd come between

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Roshini Mathews

@RoshiniManeet

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Gud morning Shruthi...

yeasterday ur OS was bedtime story for me...hubby kept telling me to put away my mobile and hence I read the story under my blanket...obedient wifey u see...

clicked a like yesterday but commenting today...

Lovely yaar...how much I now want sanskaar to be down with some fever...pls CVs...let sanskaar have fever...

u know..the serial gives us very little self thought. We get to see self thoughts only on OS and this one is soo warm to heart. I hope the series does give us a detailed falling in love phase...

if its not too much an ask , can u please give us an OS on an outing by Swasan and RagLak...wherein sanskaar gets a confirmation of swara's love for him and raglak get to know they no longer are a part of swasan life..

I love ur language a lot...thanks for the OS dear

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misaki

@misaki

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

I'm late again! Hate work😡 My internet was acting super weird yesterday and I was forced to sleep early🤔

Though I hated the fact that I am forced to come here on a weekend was looking forward to getting to the office because of the internet 😆

Getting to the point..😛

I can almost imagine this happening on the show with all the SwaSan-ilicious episodes that we are getting. I can so imagine even the "Swara on the show" doing it. Gosh! My Sanskaar🥺

I absolutely loved the "parched man" reference. This is why I love reading your works. How beautifully you have managed to bring out the vicious circle that Sanskaar has inevitably sentenced himself to.

The last part obviously explained why it was all so worth it. I obviously loooveddd the peck on the forehead and the way it was done. She couldn't help herself and it had been over before she even realized what she was doing. That was such a perfect moment that my heart went AAahhh!.*sigh*...

Swara you idiot! Now you know... It just happens❤️

Shruts 🤗 I really really love reading your works because I feel like you and I both love him the same way ( I know everyone loves him of course but it's not the same.. atleast not in my head😕😆) and the way you get him is so damn perfect .This is my Sanskaar and I am completely and irrevocably in love with him ❤️

Edited by misaki - 9 years ago

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: asexualflower

Gahh that was tooo cute😭
I really enjoyed reading this OS.
Youre so talented Shruti, and I love reading all of your work. Even though I don't comment on all of them, I do read all of them.
Keep up the great work!
Can't wait for the next one!
And please do pm me when you write a new one.😊

Thank you Sapna and for your consistent support in reading all my ramblings, that means a lot! I don't know about talented; I just enjoy it, writing has always been an obsession since childhood! Well I am eager to write the last part of the Comprehensions Series today or tomorrow too so let's see:). Glad you enjoyed this one! X

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Shruti dearest,

it is a treat to read how Swara's feelings are eventually changing. Although Sanskar is sick, I felt at peace reading this.

I really liked the part where she was thinking how his face looked familiar yet new... it has the right amount of pressure, and the right dose of romantic realization. I enjoyed every other bit too.

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Ardhikian

@Ardhikian

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Awww 😳
Amazing piece of work 😃

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: iam-in-love
OS was vry beautifully written.

Swara changed from frnd mode to wife mode... And forehead kiss...

Hey! Glad you liked it- thanks:)

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ASRushi

@ASRushi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Loved the os. It must have been a blissful smile that adorned Sanskaar's face after the kiss after all who doesn't like to see their love being reciprocated.

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