Heal Me- A SwaSan OS - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Instead of show original CV u should be a CV dear...We will get nice nice scenes from show...
Enjoyed reading it...
The words u have chosen was so awesome...
Loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu91

Instead of show original CV u should be a CV dear...We will get nice nice scenes from show...

Enjoyed reading it...
The words u have chosen was so awesome...
Loved it...


Anu- I am so sorry, I have just realised you had commented on this. Your so kind- thank you so much for such praise! I am pleased you liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww.. So sweet.. Kash SR me bhi kuch aise scene dikhaye... Exceptionally well..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Purbishona

Awww.. So sweet.. Kash SR me bhi kuch aise scene dikhaye... Exceptionally well..


Thank you Purbi, SR main drama hi drama par focus karna hai unko. Scenes aur characters ki kisse padi hai 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Wondefully written, as always 😳

Loved how you wrote about those array of emotions Sanskaar feels when he's around Swara. That contrast between uncontainable joy and heartbreaking pain is marvellous.

Swara being full on wifey mode 🥳 Her threatening Sanskaar with Sujata 😆

And that last part. Swara's actions speaking volumes of her hidden feelings for her hubby. Really liked the way you penned down her pull towards him and how her mind and body reacted to that kiss. 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Shruti :)
This was beautiful .
Thnks for the PM wasn't around IF was playing sanskar's role being ill :p so the delay


Ibteda -e-ehsaas hai
Rooh bhi hai beawaz!

Something changing!
Someone having a new vision about few things. Love has entered it just needs realisation.and lil push .they are so perfect for each other

Badle badle kuch ehsaas
Tham se gaye jazbaat
Ye kaise uljhan se guzar rahe
Khud dil bhi hai hairan


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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: ros_aavir


Wondefully written, as always 😳

Loved how you wrote about those array of emotions Sanskaar feels when he's around Swara. That contrast between uncontainable joy and heartbreaking pain is marvellous.

Swara being full on wifey mode 🥳 Her threatening Sanskaar with Sujata 😆

And that last part. Swara's actions speaking volumes of her hidden feelings for her hubby. Really liked the way you penned down her pull towards him and how her mind and body reacted to that kiss. 😳


Thank you so much for your lovely comments! Reading the way you felt from the OS truly warned my heart- I so appreciate your comments on all my work 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Shruti :)

This was beautiful .
Thnks for the PM wasn't around IF was playing sanskar's role being ill :p so the delay


Ibteda -e-ehsaas hai
Rooh bhi hai beawaz!

Something changing!
Someone having a new vision about few things. Love has entered it just needs realisation.and lil push .they are so perfect for each other

Badle badle kuch ehsaas
Tham se gaye jazbaat
Ye kaise uljhan se guzar rahe
Khud dil bhi hai hairan



Hey Shab! How are you? I was wondering where you were lost, good to see you back! Thanks for this and OMG- those lines are just ❤️. I love Urdu -it is so soulful and whilst I write my dialogues in Hindi, I sometimes have to forcibly avoid the temptation to use Urdu words! x
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I liked this one a lot, Shruti! It just gave me the feels. I don't know whose heart was pounding more as I read the last bit: Sanskaar's or mine! 😆

Swara cares a lot about everyone in general, so I'm eager to see how she would look after the man she really loves!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: inlieu


</div><div>I liked this one a lot, Shruti! It just gave me the feels. I don't know whose heart was pounding more as I read the last bit: Sanskaar's or mine! 😆

Swara cares a lot about everyone in general, so I'm eager to see how she would look after the man she really loves!


Thank you sweetheart! If someone gets the "feels" reading my SwaSan I'm happy! I do see a mega caring track coming up, maybe with the stupid bomb blast twist we may at least get something good?! X

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