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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing end to an amazing story 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am 😭
its over.
Chalo..I'll go and drink some elixir.😃

That letter. Oh my God. My feet turned cold at one point when he suddenly said..I am choosing kavi over you one last time.

and that sentence.'We'll meet when its spring again' poignancy at its best. How he is no longer the Ice king and he cannot have the snow queen by his side. He wants his swara.😊

and then Ragini. My god, that broken picture you painted in the beginning...broken yet...not falling apart. she knows exactly wht she has done, she has lost all her minions...and yet..she accepts it, as an apt punishment. I love this version.

Laksh as expected went back grovelling to swara.🤢 and ragini was right he never would have loved her. But mercifully, swara now has her own sun.😃

Lovely ending saku...

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I am no Ice King or snow Queen,
I'll call myself, umm...an Ice cream lover.😃

--Medha.
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Posted: 9 years ago
So winter is over. SwaSan are one. What I am utterly happy with is the way you let Ragini go. You know I love her. And I would have been sick sad to watch her melt into a pool at Lakshya's feet. Thank God she kept her dignity, her aura and her stature up as she left.
To say the truth, I'll miss your winter series. This imaginary yet fascinating land you whisked us to with each and every one of your chapters...I'll really miss it. I have everything in front of my eyes...the way it started to now, how everything is done and dusted. I remember the journey as well as if I have been a part of it. Which, maybe I have. As a reader, as an appreciator.
Honestly, it was a story I became really involved with. Which I rarely do.
If you ever decide to write a suspense-mystery-thriller love story again, you are most welcome. 😉
I have read elixir the introduction and as always I look forward to it.
But your Ice King and Snow Queen will remain in my heart forever
As two lovers meant to be, as my SwaSan and as of course one of the best pieces of writing that I thank my luck to have witnessed
Some stories stay with you, they are beyond just words or events or interactions or entertainment
They are undescribable
They are magic
Love, regards and gratitude. For keeping me on tenterhooks with your updates
And for giving me this magical story
Hats off, take a bow Sakura 👏
And just to let you know, I love winter...more than the spring
Perhaps that is why your story is so close to me


Edited by Ardhikian - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update . I liked this version of characters for a change. Also the way you wrap it up was good. It feel like reading a book and getting to the final page you so much desired. And I am so happy the way it ended but sad it ended.
I will definitely check elixir. I do know it will be awesome too.

Thanks for the PM. I really appreciate it. 😊
Edited by NitaMikealson - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is the best fanfic i have read so far...u could get this published...its awesome...will miss waiting for ur updates everyday...keep writing more
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was a wonderful story to read. I enjoyed it immensely. In will miss this story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I can't believe it's done!!!
After all that has happened Ragini still doesn't give up? I must say, I admire her 'Never say never' attitude.
Sanskaar's letter and DP's advice was great!
Loved Swara's "melt me" and the ending was adorable!
See you at your new SS
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Posted: 9 years ago
a very good ending to a spectacular series, !
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Posted: 9 years ago
I find difficult to belive this is a fan fic. Its brillent dear and hope and hope that rags had fabricated that .
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Saku...this chapter seemed almost allegorical in some ways: the way you'd described the ending of winter and beginning of spring, the way the Maheshwari business empire and their Machiavellian dealings, and other peer rivals like Chandraraj, are forever in this winter land, their feelings and consciences frozen. And Ragini---despite staking and losing, she is still so frozen that she feels no remorse or desire for redemption. Her driving motive is still, to ensure that her sister never sees spring enter her frozen life again. Chilling!

Sanskaar's letter to Swara was masterfully written, conveying so much, in such a crisp yet intense manner. I loved the way he fearlessly tells her he would always love her, and gives her the space and time to decide what she feels. Typical of Sanskaar. 😊

If I had to pick my favorite lines this time, they would be extracts from Sanskaar's letter:

""There, I said it. I love you. I am no coward I could have said this face to face, looking in to your eyes. But then I would not find the energy in me enough to leave you. But leave you I must, in order to give you enough space to think.

This is where I stand. I love you. But accepting or declining that love is utterly your decision. ... ...I know I don't deserve you; you're far too fragile and innocent for me. But if you ever decide to come, I shall protect you all my life.

If you don't come...you can't stop me from loving you and I will love you until I cease to exist. But I have had enough of this isolation, I don't enjoy it anymore. So I do hope you will forsake this winter land. We will meet again, very soon, when I have found my peace and you have found your answer. You owe me that answer still.

Hopefully it'll be spring when we meet again.""

So this is the end of the IK and SQ saga...and I would be lying if I said I didn't feel sad at that! 😕 Looking forward to Elixir, is that a kind of sequel to this? The precap sounded a bit like a near death experience of Swara's, but I read it while traveling, on the phone. So probably I need to read again. 😊

Viji dear🤗
Thank you so much!😳
I'm glad you picked up almost everything from Sanskar's love confession as your favorites. I tried to be natural Sanskar here, if you felt it typical then I'm honored.
Yes, Ragini ended up as frozen as she was at the start, she is forever the snow queen alone in her ice caste.
Elixir is not a sequel dear, it is an entirely different story😳 I hope to see you there😃

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