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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Yesterday I read the Ice King and today the Snow Queen. From start to finish, the story held my attention and I don't want to come out of this winter wonderland.

All good things come to an end, I agree. But the end that you have given us in this had been a surprising and interesting turn of events self-explaining the characteristics of the Ice King and the Snow Queen.

I especially love the analogy that the Ice King, so formidable, has melted to a sword in Snow Queen's hands for her to use it per her discretion. Yet she being the Queen had guarded it and once again raised a King out of it and has herself shed the snow revealing a beautiful Queen fit for this King.

Oh I love this! I adore this! And I want more of this!

Thanks for these two splendid works and please keep writing more of them.

Sharon

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: -Jamina
Wow amazing yaaa
I'm gonna miss ur ICE KING and SNOW QUEEN.
But so happy you started a new one 😳
Looking forward to your new SS I know it's gonna be awesome 😊

Thanks for the PM dear 😃

Thanks ya😊

I'm going to miss them too, it was too fun writing😃

We'll meet again with elixir😳

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: foresight
amazing end to an amazing story 👏

Thank you very much😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: medhasankar
I am 😭
its over.
Chalo..I'll go and drink some elixir.😃

That letter. Oh my God. My feet turned cold at one point when he suddenly said..I am choosing kavi over you one last time.

and that sentence.'We'll meet when its spring again' poignancy at its best. How he is no longer the Ice king and he cannot have the snow queen by his side. He wants his swara.😊

and then Ragini. My god, that broken picture you painted in the beginning...broken yet...not falling apart. she knows exactly wht she has done, she has lost all her minions...and yet..she accepts it, as an apt punishment. I love this version.

Laksh as expected went back grovelling to swara.🤢 and ragini was right he never would have loved her. But mercifully, swara now has her own sun.😃

Lovely ending saku...

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I am no Ice King or snow Queen,
I'll call myself, umm...an Ice cream lover.😃

--Medha.

Aww Medhu baby don't cry🤗

Have some elixir😳

Thanks dear, I really love reading your comments, they are so inspiring!

Yes well, the winter is ending and so is the ice king and Snow queen dramas. They would start over in a new spring!

And Ragini, I thought it was best to leave her frozen, I can't reform her and her continuing battles are such a headache in the show, so she would leave with her dignity in tact.

Lakshya, well he is lakshya and would behave like him, but Swara has put her foot down at the right moment. She has her Sun to go back to😳

I love Ice cream too, but give elixir a chance at dinner as well😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: princess_tara
superb

Thanks😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: Ardhikian
So winter is over. SwaSan are one. What I am utterly happy with is the way you let Ragini go. You know I love her. And I would have been sick sad to watch her melt into a pool at Lakshya's feet. Thank God she kept her dignity, her aura and her stature up as she left.
To say the truth, I'll miss your winter series. This imaginary yet fascinating land you whisked us to with each and every one of your chapters...I'll really miss it. I have everything in front of my eyes...the way it started to now, how everything is done and dusted. I remember the journey as well as if I have been a part of it. Which, maybe I have. As a reader, as an appreciator.
Honestly, it was a story I became really involved with. Which I rarely do.
If you ever decide to write a suspense-mystery-thriller love story again, you are most welcome. 😉
I have read elixir the introduction and as always I look forward to it.
But your Ice King and Snow Queen will remain in my heart forever
As two lovers meant to be, as my SwaSan and as of course one of the best pieces of writing that I thank my luck to have witnessed
Some stories stay with you, they are beyond just words or events or interactions or entertainment
They are undescribable
They are magic
Love, regards and gratitude. For keeping me on tenterhooks with your updates
And for giving me this magical story
Hats off, take a bow Sakura 👏
And just to let you know, I love winter...more than the spring
Perhaps that is why your story is so close to me

This was a lovely comment😊

Thanks a lot dear🤗

Yes I can't reform ragini and obviously can't have her hoovering over my SwaSan happy ending, so I let her leave her head held high, her last cards played.

You have been a part of the winter land as much as I've been, so I'm glad you felt the journey so warm and close to your heart as a reader as I felt while writing it.

I don't really know how I'm going to respond to all the appreciation you have bestowed upon me, but they were truly heart felt and I am so greatfull to you😳

Have some elixir from my behalf😃

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#427

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Edited by Smilelicious - 10 years ago

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson
Awesome update . I liked this version of characters for a change. Also the way you wrap it up was good. It feel like reading a book and getting to the final page you so much desired. And I am so happy the way it ended but sad it ended.
I will definitely check elixir. I do know it will be awesome too.

Thanks for the PM. I really appreciate it. 😊

Thank you dear.

I'm so happy you felt for the characters. I know the bittersweet feeling of biding farewell to something we have come to love, but don't be sad have some elixir😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Amazing...
Loved it...

Thanks😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#430

Originally posted by: chemgirl
This is the best fanfic i have read so far...u could get this published...its awesome...will miss waiting for ur updates everyday...keep writing more

Thank you very much dear.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this😊

Check the link for Elixir if you're interested to read more from me😊