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jisa

@jisa

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#391

Loved it...!!!
Respect for RP...
i loved the realization sanskar had for her father...
and all the twist this chapter has brought..!!
w8ng for next..!

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: jisa
Loved it...!!!
Respect for RP...
i loved the realization sanskar had for her father...
and all the twist this chapter has brought..!!
w8ng for next..!

Thanks dear😊

I'm glad you weren't disappointed😊

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akanjli

@akanjli

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: Sakura24

I'm glad you liked it this much😊
Now answer time,
Yes they thought Ram was his father. But that was never the base of DP's choice to make Sanskar their heir.
Yashodara died after giving birth to sanskar but not immediately after hence she had time to transfer her property.
Chandraraj thought Yasho had fallen in love with Ram in spite of being in a relationship with him, Yasho being a egoistic woman would not go begging after her ex even if she was pregnant, he knew of the child but in his misunderstanding refused to accept it was his.
I seriously blushed at this...they would never show Sanskar another's child dear😳
I love you fault in our stars reference, it is one of my favorites.
You'll have another Swasan scene in the next chapter, don't be angry at me please😳
I already have another idea for a SS, will continue after a slight break😃
Thanks a lot dear, this was lovely and wonderful comment to read😊

Oh you never know in Indian TV land. They can any day make Sanskaar an adopted one, giving Ragini and Laksh more motives.

And I can never be angry at you, don't you worry.

and thank you so much for taking time and clearing my doubts. By the way I have got one more.

In the council it is reviled that Sanskaar is Yashodra's Son but is it also reviled that he is Chandraraj's ?

I think yes.

and thanks again for the answers.

P.S. Happy Diwali Sakura😊

Love- Ahana

Edited by akanjli - 9 years ago

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#394

I can just say MINDBLOWING Sakura👏

6th part: you're so good at describing Sakura, the characters' emotions and feelings were penned down beautifully. I felt so angry with Ragini and AP😡 But RP literally surprised me, he took a stand for his son. Wow! Laksh's bak-bak is so annoying, he is believing Ragini but soon he will get to know the truth😆

I loved the detective Swara.

The reference to the chess game was so good. 'Sometimes when you are obsessed with saving your knight, you end up exposing your king itself' 👏

And the battle had begun.

7th part: Ragini is so chalu, she swapped the bottles and no one noticed that, not even Sanskar. But Swara was not angry with him for that. Hmmm.

Swara do care for Sanskar, and that's why she was worried for his health 😳 'What would i have done if something happened to you?' ❤️

You describe amazingly the reference to the flames and ice, referring to Annapurna.

And Yashodara tried to ruin RP & Sujata's marriage? And because of her Sujata was about to lose her unborn baby? 😲 This quite shocked me. What's her secret?

The conversation between Swara and Ragini gave me goosebumps. As Swara said this is not called love. And this line 'If you ever drag Sanskar between us, i might have to unleash a bigger storm Ragini' 👏

The description of RP & Yashodara with the reference to Mercury was outstanding. AP knows only a part of the truth not the entire, that's interesting.

Ragini and Chandraraj, i hate them 😡 Ragini is so blind in her revenge. And she is treating Chandraraj as her pawn😲 She is so cunning.

8th part: Sujata has always been attracted towards Ram 'he looked a prince out of a fairy tale'

So RP loved Yashodara but she didn't love him back, and that's why Sujata hates her.

'love... is a very bad drug' very well said.

Both married each other but with different purposes, oh. Poor Sujata, she wanted him to reciprocate her love one day.

The way you decribed Yashodara was fab. Even Sujata accepted that she was a sunshine, she was everything a man would ever desire.

OMG Sanskar is Yashodara's son? Sujata lost his child? And everyone knew this apart of her.

This line made me cry 😭 'After all Kanha always belong to Yashoda' 'Yashodara might have given birth to a baby, she was the one who gave birth to Sanskar' Bang on!

The conversation between SwaSan are always beautiful. The trust between them 😳 no one can ever break that trust.

He sprayed water on her, aww I would love to see this kind of scene in the show <3

She is falling in love, for sure. 'This was not friendship,it was something sinister'

9th part: So finally Sanskar got to know the truth. I can't imagine the pain he is gong through. And Ragini questioned his legitimacy and insulted him 😡

Woho Swara called Laksh 'Devar Ji' Go Swara! 😆 But the next line surprised me. He is not with Ragini. What? How is this possible? And Sanskar's life is in danger?

I loved the way you unfold the whole story.

Chandraraj loved Yashodara, and he believes that RP tried to separate them?

Sanskar is his and Yashodara's son. OMG, twist par twist 😲 So basically he is going to kill his own blood.

I truly loved Ram's dialogue 😳 'You are my son. Never dare to say anything against that [...] You are my son. The son, i lived and would someday die for!' 👏

The relief Swara felt seeing him alive in front of her eyes.

'You are always incomplete without the king'

'I am no king'

'You are, even without a crown.'

Simply beautiful Sakura 😳

10th and final part: I never wanted this story to finish.

I was so glad to read that Ragini sat alone in the lawn of the MM with the divorce papers in her hand. She deserves only this. She underestimated her sister, she treated her like a pawn when she was not.

'Life can't change seasons as fast as nature does. She had willingly stepped in to this winter, and winter her life always shall be'

I loved the reference to the sun and the stars.

And the letter from Sanskar to Swara. AMAZING! OUTSTANDING! BEAUTIFUL! I don't have enough words to describe how well you wrote it. Kudos to you 👏

And their kiss. 'Her lips felt cold against his warm ones as they kissed under the winter sunlight dancing in straps of gold and silver and in the breeze there was the fragrance of spring'

Well done Sakura 🤗 I loved this SS as much as i loved the Ice King and now will read your next SS😳

Edited by Smilelicious - 9 years ago

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#395

That was a surprise! Sanskaar is Chandraraj's son? I did not expect that!

It was Annapurna that was on the phone? That was a surprise too!

Love the Ram Prasad in this story. I loved reading about Sanskaar's admiration for his father. Will we get a Sujatha-Sanskaar scene too in the next chapter?

I love how protective and possessive Swara is of Sanskaar. She is quite a vengeful little thing when Sanskaar is in danger isn't she? How I wish the Swara in the show is like this with atleast half the intelligence she has in this story?

Will Durga Prasad wake up in the next part along with SwaSan confessions? I can't believe that this story is almost finished! Is there a sequel to this? Do you have any other fiction planned for the future?

Looking forward to the next chapter! Continue soon.

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#396

Thanks for the PM, 😊

It was amazing and i loved it👏, I absolutely love Swasan scenes wish we get something like this on the show in the near future because the current track makes me want to skip the episodes😡

Do update the Finale part soon and PM me if possible .😊

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#397

Saku- I have read various chapters and am hooked! I want to catch up and then do a proper long comment so just wanted to let you know! Seriously awesome! xoxo

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: akanjli

Oh you never know in Indian TV land. They can any day make Sanskaar an adopted one, giving Ragini and Laksh more motives.
And I can never be angry at you, don't you worry.
and thank you so much for taking time and clearing my doubts. By the way I have got one more.
In the council it is reviled that Sanskaar is Yashodra's Son but is it also reviled that he is Chandraraj's ?
I think yes.
and thanks again for the answers.

P.S. Happy Diwali Sakura😊
Love- Ahana

😆 Perhaps. We'll see about that then😊

Yes Ragini had said that too. I didn't go to details because I wanted to explode the bomb when Swara says this to Chandraraj. Ram and sanskar's conversation gave Sanskar an inside account of the incidents, explaining why Ram did certain things in a certain way.

Happy Diwali to you too Ahana🤗