Snow Queen SwaSan SS complete - Page 44

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

It was a wonderful story to read. I enjoyed it immensely. In will miss this story.

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

I can't believe it's done!!!

After all that has happened Ragini still doesn't give up? I must say, I admire her 'Never say never' attitude.

Sanskaar's letter and DP's advice was great!

Loved Swara's "melt me" and the ending was adorable!

See you at your new SS

Originally posted by: jisa

a very good ending to a spectacular series, !

Originally posted by: swa291

I find difficult to belive this is a fan fic. Its brillent dear and hope and hope that rags had fabricated that .

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Yesterday I read the Ice King and today the Snow Queen. From start to finish, the story held my attention and I don't want to come out of this winter wonderland.

All good things come to an end, I agree. But the end that you have given us in this had been a surprising and interesting turn of events self-explaining the characteristics of the Ice King and the Snow Queen.

I especially love the analogy that the Ice King, so formidable, has melted to a sword in Snow Queen's hands for her to use it per her discretion. Yet she being the Queen had guarded it and once again raised a King out of it and has herself shed the snow revealing a beautiful Queen fit for this King.

Oh I love this! I adore this! And I want more of this!

Thanks for these two splendid works and please keep writing more of them.

Sharon

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Unressed pag 54😳

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written...👏

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

I can just say MINDBLOWING Sakura👏

6th part: you're so good at describing Sakura, the characters' emotions and feelings were penned down beautifully. I felt so angry with Ragini and AP😡 But RP literally surprised me, he took a stand for his son. Wow! Laksh's bak-bak is so annoying, he is believing Ragini but soon he will get to know the truth😆

I loved the detective Swara.

The reference to the chess game was so good. 'Sometimes when you are obsessed with saving your knight, you end up exposing your king itself' 👏

And the battle had begun.

7th part: Ragini is so chalu, she swapped the bottles and no one noticed that, not even Sanskar. But Swara was not angry with him for that. Hmmm.

Swara do care for Sanskar, and that's why she was worried for his health 😳 'What would i have done if something happened to you?' ❤️

You describe amazingly the reference to the flames and ice, referring to Annapurna.

And Yashodara tried to ruin RP & Sujata's marriage? And because of her Sujata was about to lose her unborn baby? 😲 This quite shocked me. What's her secret?

The conversation between Swara and Ragini gave me goosebumps. As Swara said this is not called love. And this line 'If you ever drag Sanskar between us, i might have to unleash a bigger storm Ragini' 👏

The description of RP & Yashodara with the reference to Mercury was outstanding. AP knows only a part of the truth not the entire, that's interesting.

Ragini and Chandraraj, i hate them 😡 Ragini is so blind in her revenge. And she is treating Chandraraj as her pawn😲 She is so cunning.

8th part: Sujata has always been attracted towards Ram 'he looked a prince out of a fairy tale'

So RP loved Yashodara but she didn't love him back, and that's why Sujata hates her.

'love... is a very bad drug' very well said.

Both married each other but with different purposes, oh. Poor Sujata, she wanted him to reciprocate her love one day.

The way you decribed Yashodara was fab. Even Sujata accepted that she was a sunshine, she was everything a man would ever desire.

OMG Sanskar is Yashodara's son? Sujata lost his child? And everyone knew this apart of her.

This line made me cry 😭 'After all Kanha always belong to Yashoda' 'Yashodara might have given birth to a baby, she was the one who gave birth to Sanskar' Bang on!

The conversation between SwaSan are always beautiful. The trust between them 😳 no one can ever break that trust.

He sprayed water on her, aww I would love to see this kind of scene in the show <3

She is falling in love, for sure. 'This was not friendship,it was something sinister'

9th part: So finally Sanskar got to know the truth. I can't imagine the pain he is gong through. And Ragini questioned his legitimacy and insulted him 😡

Woho Swara called Laksh 'Devar Ji' Go Swara! 😆 But the next line surprised me. He is not with Ragini. What? How is this possible? And Sanskar's life is in danger?

I loved the way you unfold the whole story.

Chandraraj loved Yashodara, and he believes that RP tried to separate them?

Sanskar is his and Yashodara's son. OMG, twist par twist 😲 So basically he is going to kill his own blood.

I truly loved Ram's dialogue 😳 'You are my son. Never dare to say anything against that [...] You are my son. The son, i lived and would someday die for!' 👏

The relief Swara felt seeing him alive in front of her eyes.

'You are always incomplete without the king'

'I am no king'

'You are, even without a crown.'

Simply beautiful Sakura 😳

10th and final part: I never wanted this story to finish.

I was so glad to read that Ragini sat alone in the lawn of the MM with the divorce papers in her hand. She deserves only this. She underestimated her sister, she treated her like a pawn when she was not.

'Life can't change seasons as fast as nature does. She had willingly stepped in to this winter, and winter her life always shall be'

I loved the reference to the sun and the stars.

And the letter from Sanskar to Swara. AMAZING! OUTSTANDING! BEAUTIFUL! I don't have enough words to describe how well you wrote it. Kudos to you 👏

And their kiss. 'Her lips felt cold against his warm ones as they kissed under the winter sunlight dancing in straps of gold and silver and in the breeze there was the fragrance of spring'

Well done Sakura 🤗 I loved this SS as much as i loved the Ice King and now will read your next SS😳

Originally posted by: anu91

Perfect ending dear...

Chosen of words were awesome...