'Saudade'-- A SwaSan O.S

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Beautiful...👏

Thank you 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: jasw
Absolutely beautiful OS, Viji. Loved the OS name too! Beautiful meaning! I sooo want this incorporated in the serial! Swara having the MISSION of uniting with Sanskar!!! And I hope Sanskar makes it a tad bit difficult for Swara! 😛
Loved how Swara's kisses were getting displaced gradually to the center! 😆

Are you continuing this OS? I will have utter and complete joy if you write a sequel to this! 😉

A very happy Dussehra to you too!

Hey...thanks so much for your comment. 😊 Very glad you liked this OS. "Saudade" is a beautiful word, na? So full of poignant melancholy, yet redolent with romance 😉 Very apt for SwaSan in the current situation of their lives!

I had a lot of fun thinking and writing ways in which Swara woos Sansku, in this OS. Happy that you liked the bit about her "kissing" approach to wooing him 😉

I don't think I will be continuing this OS. Have started writing my next SS on SwaSan. Hope to have it up Nov 1st week.

Happy Dussehra! 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: anju10
amazing os dear
wonderfully written
superb 👏 👏 👏
thanx for the pm

Thanks Anju. 😊 Glad you liked it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: kriti_sologar
ohh wow beautifully written dear...i feel soo sorry for Sanskar...at this point in time I am hating Laksh soo so much...anyhoos..this was beautifully written dear...lived every bit of it..absolutely wonderful...

Thanks so much Kriti. Felt very glad to hear that you liked my OS so much, you could live every moment of it. 😊 that was some very generous words of appreciation. 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Unresed pag 5 😊

Thanks dear. Will reply on that comment. 😊

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Cintila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Viji. .!🤗 I'm so sorry I'm commenting so late dear.

I honestly don't know what to say. You know how much i love all your works. My most favorite one is 'Second Chances' and now this one would be my second most favorite. 😳 Finally swara realized her husband's importance. Phew ! The part where she tries to woo him is really nice. I loved all the cute things that she did. The 'peck on the cheek' thing was adorable😆

Sanskaar's pain was justified too. I loved how he didn't just give in. I hope they show something like this in the show aswell.

And now...the most favorite part of mine ofcourse was the ending ! It was soo beautifully written. It was just perfect !⭐️👏

Thank you for writing this Viji...i always look forward to your os's. Thanks for the pm too 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: SONAL30
Unresd on 1st page

Thanks Sonal dear. Will reply on that one. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Breezy-
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Thanks dear 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: SONAL30
Hey viji
First of all sorry for the late reply
Asusual beautifully written update
Yaar u writes so beautifully...i must say u r a brilliant writer😃
Now coming to the story😆
Loved the way u have portrayed swara's journey...she was a carefree girl then she became lux's fiance n then sanskaar's wife
The way she renembered her past n differentiate between the two guys was so beautifully written
Her journey...from a confused n devastated girl to a loving n devotee wife👏
She had confessed her feelings but just because of her previous behaviour sanskaar rejected her proposal n became stone heartedpoor girl she was trying her best to rectify her mistakes but all went in vain just because of her previous actions...sanskaar was also right...she used him so much ki bande ka bharosa hi uth gya
But she chose to behave like a perfect wifey...she did all his work that too with so much love n devotion😳
N most important part of ur OS...The College Reunion...that was so nice
Swara was trying to win sanskaar's love but he misunderstood hern his frd was so cute he helped her a lot
Sanskaar felt jealous...ahaan😉 but he shouted at her n she felt bad😭she had made a collage of his smiling n happy moments...so cute😳
Finally that dhakkan realized his mistake n said sorry
The last part was☺️ especially the last line...naughty sanskaar😉
Loved it so much viji
Thanks for the pm dear🤗

Sonal...🤗 🤗 Firstly please don't say Sorry yaar. I am just happy my friends read my works. 😊 I would want you to read and comment at your leisure, when you have time. No pressure to comment asap or anything. 😊

I was very touched by your detailed and lovely comment yaar. Am very glad you liked this piece. I truly feel that if Swara decides to stay in her marriage, as an "act", just to ensure RagYa get back together, then Sansku is bound to feel hurt. I would like to see Swara realize her feelings for him, and then make a lot of effort to win Sansku's trust back, and to woo him in a romantic manner. 😉

Glad you liked the ending. I was going ☺️ when I wrote that on my favorite couple, so I am glad you liked it, too!! BTW I am very. very eagerly awaiting the next update to your SS "My Only Wish". I just love that one yaar. Please update soon!

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago