'Saudade'-- A SwaSan O.S

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Supriya Gupta

@SupriyaG96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Another master piece writing from you 👏 👏
Incredible 😳
"Saudade" is indeed an epic word ⭐️
""Considered one of the most beautiful words in the world, for which there is no direct translation in English. It describes a deep nostalgic or profound melancholic longing for someone that one loves. It brings sad and happy feelings all at once; sadness from missing something loved, but happiness for having experienced the love. The Great Portuguese writer Manuel de Milo calls it A pleasure you suffer, an ailment you enjoy...'"" It had summoned the entire meaning of Love ❤️
At last Swara realised how much she had hurted Sanskaar's feelings
Loved how Sanskaar gave some fitting replies to Swara which is needed now in the show

Swara being determined to get her love back ⭐️
Swara's kiss and Uttara taking pic 😆
'On the first day, she had kissed him at the edge of his cheek, almost near his ear. But since then, she had gradually and incrementally moved sideways, and now she pecked him perilously close to his lips' What an epic plan by Swara 😳 ⭐️ 😉
Sanskaar being jealous of Dhruv 😛
And the last part Swara-Sanskaar passionate kiss *blush* "I'm not sure about Portuguese, but there is a certain type of body language, I believe, which can explain this utter and complete joy you are talking about. We can study those words in our room later, Mrs Maheshwari...you do know the pillow wall is going to be dismantled tonight, right?"

Finally our naughty Sanskaar is back 😉

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

This is just too beautifully written, I could see it happening in front o me. A writer;s greatest asset is to make the reader's imagine how it is happening with a clear view. I could say I have sen it all through the camera lens, that clear it was to me . I loveee your work so much !!!!

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Hey Samiya 😊 Already saw it dear, thanks. Had replied on that comment too in fact, earlier today. Thanks again for your most lovely words of appreciation. 😊</font>

sorry didn't chkd...well waiting for something very romantic on swason from ur pen...it would be a treat for people like me who are fan of ur works

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Viji 🤗 This took my breath away, once again 👏
I heard this word Saudade for the first time, so thank you for letting us know this new word 😊
I loved Sanskar's character here. The way he tried to stay away from Swara and avoid her was bang on!
Even though a bit late Swara realized her feelings but kehte hai na der aaye drust aaye😆
The last part was mesmerizing So beautifully written.
Your works are a delight to read and make my day😳
I just fell more and more in love with SwaSan whenever i read any FF or OS, especially yours, Medha's and Shruti's. 👏
Happy Dussehra to you and your family 🤗

Preet my dear friend 🤗 🤗 Thanks so much for your absolutely lovely comment. Made my day, yaar! 😊 Saudade is a lovely word, na? So full of melancholy, yet with the lovely aroma of romance...aahhh I just love it! Completely fits the present stage of SwaSan romance! 😉

Am very glad that you loved the concluding portion. I was day dreaming of SwaSan romance when I wrote it ☺️ so I am so very, very happy that you liked it!

And Preet...That was so very nice of you to say that reading my works could make you fall more and more in love with SwaSan. 😊 That is like the best compliment ever for me, you know what a HUGE SwaSan fan I am, and how much I love reading your works also. I find your Fics very moving. A Huge 🤗 from me, dear friend...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...
Saudade..

loved the description of the word..
ah the emotions!

thank you for introducing me to such a gorgeous title and the story that followed it.
what a beautiful journey.

the best compliment that i could give you Viji is >.. every time i read your story (any story of your's) i feel Happy..

doesn't matter if it is OS, SS or FF... just keep them coming.

Hi Nimmi 😊 Yes, I fell in love with the word "Saudade" the moment I read its meaning. So achingly, heart tuggingly, poetically beautiful, isn't it? Kind of like SwaSan romance at the moment, which is why I immediately associated the word with them. 😊

Am happy I could make you feel Happy, dear. 😊 Thanks for your warm words and am very glad you liked this O.S.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10
Viji superb superb yaar. You are just too good. 😊 I always love your take on the happenings in the show. You always manage to take the current plot line and give such an interesting spin to it that the reader is fully immersed in it and ends up wanting for more. The directors should take a cue from you. Sanskar's pain and agony is so palpable and I love the part where he told Swara that he cannot trust her now especially if she is able to break off even his friendship with a blink of an eye. I think you hit the bulls eye with that part.
And the ending was 😳😳Wish you had continued. Would love to know what happened after😊.

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Hi Ruqaiya 🤗 🤗 Thanks so much for your lovely comment, dear. I was seriously ☺️ at your very generous words of appreciation.

I totally feel that IF Swara decides to continue in the marriage just to reunite RagYa, Sanskaar has every right to feel hurt and betrayed. Once Swara realizes her love, she sure has to do some work to win back Sansku's trust. I would really like to see her wooing him on the show. Would be sooo romantic!!

Am very glad you liked the ending. I had to stop there, if I had continued to describe what happened after they returned to their room, my OS might have got locked for PG 16 material 😊

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
wow this was awesome
so beautiful

Thanks so much Prachi 😊

Glad you liked it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: asexualflower
Hey CogitoErgoSum,
I must say, I love your writing. I especially really liked your elements series, it was SO GOOD. And all of your OS's are too good too. I love how you make connections and references to other pieces of literature or movies or songs. All the effort you put into your works is commendable. I have become a fan of yours. Keep up the great work! 😃

- Sapna

Hi Sapna...Please call me Viji. Thanks a lot for your lovely comment, and the warm words of appreciation for this O.S, as well as my previous work 😊. It felt really nice to know that you've read and liked them.