'Saudade'-- A SwaSan O.S - Page 7

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Your stories are always rich!
Yup, I didn't find any other appropriate adjective to honour them with.

Rich in almost everything. Love, Pain, Angst, Joy, Philosophy, humane understanding...I can go on and on.

Coming to the plot, I would love it if the show follows this pattern. But alas...
Sanskar too badly hurt and Swara;s late realization reminds me of Ranveer and Ishaani's story.
I loved the way Swara tried to woo him back and Sanskar though angry at her allowed himself to be wooed back. Their bonding is immense. Unique, simple and yet encompassing.

Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: samiya.059

Finally an os from u that is all about swason..!!!
The title itself was so intriguing ...I so loved the title
I so want swara to run behind sanskaar to accept her love.The girl has tortured poor sanku so much..It was a treat to read
I thought when she wud leave MM she mgt miss sanskaar n know his worth in her lyf ..I thought she needed a practical demo of "love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"
I liked how swara tried to make it up to him and how sanskaar ignored her
You write so amazingly that one can see a film running through the minds eye what ever u pen down
The last part where sanskaar gave her hanky was so cute..its high time he gives her rumaal for reasons other than wiping tears
I wasn't expecting a story from u so soon...but wen I got the pm I was jumping in joy
Great work
looking forward to reading more of ur works
You write such brilliant stuff that one becomes greedy to read more n more of ur works...
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

'SAUDADE' Such a beautiful word and the story u spun around it was equally beautiful, Viji. I have read about this word and it's meaning before but having its meaning translated into emotions? Now that is always the best way to remember it... Will always associate this OS and swasan with it from now on. :)

I loved the Jealous possessiveness part the most coz I somehow have a weakness for justified unjustifiable undecipherable emotions... It evokes something deep in me every time I read something well written regarding those and this fits that bill perfectly.

And dear you look like you enjoy reading new words like me; so you should definitely follow @selfamused WORDS in twitter. They tweet beautiful words like ' Hiraeth- (Welsh)- a homesickness to a place u can never return to, maybe the place never was...nostalgia, yearning... ' and 'faodail (Gaelic)- A lucky find' , etc . I came across 'Saudade' there. 😊

I just get lost in these words. You may give it a try too. :)

Originally posted by: natasha-

Beautiful OS. :)
Can you please replace the CVs? I want to see these things happening in the show. Pretty please? :)

Originally posted by: RK-ki-Kaneez

Beautiful one of the best os I have read till date on swasan great going.

Originally posted by: Prionti26

This os is great ,as a portuguese I can say that you described "saudade" really well 👏

As a thank u gift for writing this I'm copy pasting 😆 a portuguese song with English translation

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Translation :

If time is money I will spend it with you,

Up because time is all I have to give you.

I think the whole world agrees with me,

I do not want to disappoint!

If time is money I will spend it with you,

Up because time is all I have to give you.

I think the whole world agrees with me,

I do not want to disappoint!

I do not have a penny

But I have love in my heart

What if I ask for your hand

It will be done with a ring card

A cardboard church

Honeymoon will be a wall

And I will not take you by plane

But I'll give you a kiss worth a million

For I know that life costs I will not deny!

But I know that but we'll invent!

For I know that the sun in the sky never stops shining,

And the moon is anyone who can dream!

If time is money I will spend it with you,

Up because time is all I have to give you.

I think the whole world agrees with me,

I do not want to disappoint!

If time is money I will spend it with you,

Up because time is all I have to give you.

I think the whole world agrees with me,

I do not want to disappoint!

While you can not buy

An expensive gift to take you

Or a million flowers for me to steal.

And if I can not take you

Far away beyond the sea

It is a park bench might be.

For I know that life costs I will not deny!

But I know that but we'll invent!

For I know that the sun in the sky never stops shining,

And the moon is anyone who can dream!

If time is money I will spend it with you,

Up because time is all I have to give you.

I think the whole world agrees with me,

I do not want to disappoint!

If time is money I will spend it with you,

Up because time is all I have to give you.

I think the whole world agrees with me,

I do not want to disappoint!

If you want to hear the song then write

Agir - tempo dinheiro

Originally posted by: rerose

Ur welcome dr,ya ur exactly right the way the author spins his story in that novel is really awesome and I am super amazed by ur wise usage of that in ur OS ,lovely job😳

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

I loved this OS. It's beautifully written. Very relatable too. Hope to see something similar on the show. Thank you for the PM, looking forward to reading more of your work 😊