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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: swethalovely
Mind blowing OS

Thank you 😊

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anju rana

@anju10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

amazing os dear
wonderfully written
superb 👏 👏 👏
thanx for the pm

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RUQAIYA10

@RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Viji superb superb yaar. You are just too good. 😊 I always love your take on the happenings in the show. You always manage to take the current plot line and give such an interesting spin to it that the reader is fully immersed in it and ends up wanting for more. The directors should take a cue from you. Sanskar's pain and agony is so palpable and I love the part where he told Swara that he cannot trust her now especially if she is able to break off even his friendship with a blink of an eye. I think you hit the bulls eye with that part.

And the ending was 😳😳Wish you had continued. Would love to know what happened after😊.

❤️

Edited by RUQAIYA10 - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Wow!👏

After a deep & meaningful series this is lighthearted but definitely no fluff.

I loved Sanskaar in this & after watching today's episode where Swara is 100% sure that she wants a divorce till lecher starts stalking her, I want Sanskaar to behave like he did in your story at the start. I loved the extra lengths to which Swara went to convince him of her love. I especially loved all that picture clicking😆 and was expecting some random colleagues in office to tease Sanskaar about his wife's DP's😆

And like always let me end my comment with the same request: plz write more😊

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Hey Shruti 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much for your comment. Yes, I completely feel the same, that if Swara wants to postpone the divorce/ act as if they are giving the marriage a chance just to serve her new mission---bringing RagYa back together; then Sanskaar has every right to feel betrayed and hurt. I think she has to do a lot to win his trust back and woo him. I, for one, would love to see that on the show. 😊

Yeah, I really enjoyed writing the ways in which Swara tries to convince Sanskaar of her love. 😊

Will surely write more---how can I not? This is SwaSan we are talking about---my favorite obsession. 😊 Will PM you when I do.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: luvakanksha
Great work
I really hate swara for taking sanskaar for granted and I want her to redeem herself once she realises her love for sanky

Thanks Akanksha 😊 Glad you liked it. Oh, I totally feel, that if Swara takes Sanskaar for granted, she has to do a lot of work to win his trust and woo him back. 😊

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

I was supposed to unres this day before yesterday but things got in the way... Sorry for that
Now coming to your OS... Seriously Viji...Love you for writing such a beautiful OS. I really love your stories. Your writing style is so detailed and your words helds so much depth and power that anyone can feel the emotion the character is feeling. I am very choosy about what I read... but your writings I just cant stop reading... You and Shruti are one of the best writers I have read.😳Just keep sharing your words with us... 😳
Now coming to plot... I totally loved it... I really want to see Swara wooing Sanskaar... but you know in show the chances of happening it ..is so low. Loved Sanskaar stance here in your shot.. I totally understand where he was coming from. Then Swara determined to woo him back and in such a sweet way... loved it... 😳And last part... hehehehe... its naughty and ohhh..so romantic... Loved the naughty side of Sanskaar...
With loads of Love
Nityah... 😳😳

Edited by Lavender_Love - 9 years ago

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

hey...unresd my cmnt on page 5...did it yesterday only..bt forgot to tell u

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Sapna

@NainoMeinSapna

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Hey CogitoErgoSum,

I must say, I love your writing. I especially really liked your elements series, it was SO GOOD. And all of your OS's are too good too. I love how you make connections and references to other pieces of literature or movies or songs. All the effort you put into your works is commendable. I have become a fan of yours. Keep up the great work! 😃

- Sapna

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: misaki
I wish this would actually happen in the show. I absolutely loved reading it. It was so darn beautiful! So many things that made my romance craving, Sanskaar loving heart turn into a mush.
How I wish the writers had at least one tenth of the talent that you guys do.🤔
"Books are mirrors, you only see in them, what you already have in you."❤️ So true!
I really enjoyed this Sanskaar. It kind of felt like the old Sanskaar minus "lux'(that absolute piece of trash / waste of space) bhai was back". I was so very happy to have him back🤗 I'm tired of Swara trampling over Sanskaar's heart again and again. This was such a pleasant change to that. You go Sanskaar! I almost wished he did not forgive her that easily. I know I'm a sadist😆 I'm almost at that "want to hate you forever" line with her character!

Though I am glad and honestly relieved that SwaSan aren't getting divorced, I was never a fan of Ragya-mission - SwaSan milan! I really wish Swara gets to pay for everything she made Sanskaar go through! I never could relate to(forget about coming to love) a "devi ji" sort of character on any show. They always had this too good to be true/ too dumb to be liked appearance to them.
I have always seen how the "goody two shoes" (girls especially)almost always inflict more damage to themselves and the people around them(especially the guy in love with her) I would never want to be that kind of a character ever. That was me talking about TV shows in general.
When it comes to Indian TV, it gets worse. I will never understand their need to always equate good and honest with unnecessary and (almost always) self inflicted misery
I have had enough of her taking him for granted ,using him for her selfish means while she feels she is the very model of righteousness and mahaanta! Her double standards and lectures are really getting on my nerves now.😡
I really, badly want to watch her suffer and later redeem herself by fighting for the very love she so cruelly pushed aside and try to earn his trust back. Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari better earn the right to truly own the name given to her by chance.

I will stop before this becomes more a rant than a reply.

I don't think I have to mention how I loved everything about it. Your post was ice-cream to my dessert craving heart. Ice cream = Bestest dessert ever!( Now that is what I would call an example for a perfect equation😆)
Thank you so much for the PM!!

Hi Geetha 🤗 🤗 Thanks so much for this very detailed comment. Am very glad you liked this OS.

And you're not ranting at all. I completely agree with a lot of what you've said about the sheer inanity of showing these "goody two shoes", excessively martyr oriented heroines as the ideal. Being considerate and empathetic is different from being an absolute doormat! But tell that to serial makers! 😊

I felt (and this is what I translated into writing for this OS), that if Swara decides to stay in this marriage with Sansku (maybe just as a sham, planning to tell their parents they will "try" for 6 months or so); just in order to get RagYa back together, then Sansku has every right to feel tremendously betrayed and hurt.

I would really like to see Swara, once she realizes her love, being made aware of how much pain she has put him through. She needs to go all out to win his trust back and to woo him. Would be great to watch, if shown well on screen. 😉

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: samiya.059
hey...unresd my cmnt on page 5...did it yesterday only..bt forgot to tell u

Hey Samiya 😊 Already saw it dear, thanks. Had replied on that comment too in fact, earlier today. Thanks again for your most lovely words of appreciation. 😊

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