'Saudade'-- A SwaSan O.S

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd
This is just too beautifully written, I could see it happening in front o me. A writer;s greatest asset is to make the reader's imagine how it is happening with a clear view. I could say I have sen it all through the camera lens, that clear it was to me . I loveee your work so much !!!!

Hey Nisha 😊 Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave such a lovely comment. Am very glad you liked my work.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Heartbeats..
I loved it to the core!
The way u described swaras feeling😳
Sucj h a wonderful writer u are!

Thanks so much for the very warm words of appreciation 😊. Am glad you liked this OS.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love
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Thanks Nityah 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Cintila
Viji. .!🤗 I'm so sorry I'm commenting so late dear.
I honestly don't know what to say. You know how much i love all your works. My most favorite one is 'Second Chances' and now this one would be my second most favorite. 😳 Finally swara realized her husband's importance. Phew ! The part where she tries to woo him is really nice. I loved all the cute things that she did. The 'peck on the cheek' thing was adorable😆
Sanskaar's pain was justified too. I loved how he didn't just give in. I hope they show something like this in the show aswell.
And now...the most favorite part of mine ofcourse was the ending ! It was soo beautifully written. It was just perfect !⭐️👏

Thank you for writing this Viji...i always look forward to your os's. Thanks for the pm too 😳

Hi Tuhina 😊 Thanks so much dear, for the lovely comment. Am so glad you liked this O.S, and I felt on top of the world when you wrote those nice words about my previous works, including Second Chances. 😊 You have always been giving me very motivating comments right from my first SS, so Thank you, dear. 🤗 🤗 It really spurs me on to write more.

I was enjoying writing about how Swara woos Sanskaar. She needs to do that, na? 😊 I do feel, since Sanskaar had told her how he feels about her, and she had got so angry at him and even snapped off their friendship (though in yesterday's episode, she at least apologized for that 😊), now Swara has to take lead, in taking their relationship forward. After she realizes her love for Sanskaar, I would love to see her wooing him so romantically. 😉 Would be a treat to watch, I hope the CVs show that well.

I'm glad you liked the ending. I was in SwaSan dream land when I wrote that. 😉 😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: SupriyaG96
Another master piece writing from you 👏 👏
Incredible 😳
"Saudade" is indeed an epic word ⭐️
""Considered one of the most beautiful words in the world, for which there is no direct translation in English. It describes a deep nostalgic or profound melancholic longing for someone that one loves. It brings sad and happy feelings all at once; sadness from missing something loved, but happiness for having experienced the love. The Great Portuguese writer Manuel de Milo calls it A pleasure you suffer, an ailment you enjoy...'"" It had summoned the entire meaning of Love ❤️
At last Swara realised how much she had hurted Sanskaar's feelings
Loved how Sanskaar gave some fitting replies to Swara which is needed now in the show

Swara being determined to get her love back ⭐️
Swara's kiss and Uttara taking pic 😆
'On the first day, she had kissed him at the edge of his cheek, almost near his ear. But since then, she had gradually and incrementally moved sideways, and now she pecked him perilously close to his lips' What an epic plan by Swara 😳 ⭐️ 😉
Sanskaar being jealous of Dhruv 😛
And the last part Swara-Sanskaar passionate kiss *blush* "I'm not sure about Portuguese, but there is a certain type of body language, I believe, which can explain this utter and complete joy you are talking about. We can study those words in our room later, Mrs Maheshwari...you do know the pillow wall is going to be dismantled tonight, right?"

Finally our naughty Sanskaar is back 😉

Thanks Supriya, for reading and leaving this most detailed and lovely comment. 😊 I am so glad you liked this O.S.

Saudade certianly is a lovely word, isn't it? Conveys so much nostalgia and melancholy, yet full of the flavor of romance! Really fits the current stage of SwaSan relationship, which is why I immediately thought of them when I read about this word.

Am very happy you liked reading my version of Swara's wooing techniques. 😉 I certainly had a lot of fun thinking it out and writing it, so am very glad you liked reading it!

I was also very happy when you said you liked naughty Sanskaar at the ending. 😳☺️ I was day dreaming of SwaSan romance when I wrote that, so glad you liked it, too!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd
Beautifully written !!

Thanks so much Nisha 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: CutiePie..
Loved reading it!!!

Thank you so much 😊

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vaishnavi77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

"Books don't change people, paragraphs do, sometimes even sentences!'
Bowled over, completely😃
The lines and quotes used in here are too good!

Firstly, too touched to see my name listed as one of the person to whom this beautiful piece has been dedicated. Back from a two days trip and unearthed this piece to find that!

Thank you so much, Viji, for being so generous and I truly have no words to thank you, not just for the dedication but for choosing a piece that is near to me- A piece full of human emotions🤗

The title is an amazing one.😎 Apt and appealing. Somehow, reading the title gave me an imagination of Arabs and the desert flavour. Maybe Saudi, finding an oasis in the desert and Saudade have an inkling 😛

But, as I read the description of the word, I only felt like thanking the language and you for introducing this important word! Somehow this reminded me of William Wordsworth's "Solitary Reaper!'

The line - " ...And she sings a melancholy strain" seems to just pop in my mind probably explaining how sometimes the very two extremely opposite words are the ones that define us and defy us of the barriers we build around ourselves! It is always the very ' apart' ones that becomes 'a part' of us.

Maybe it is the melancholy strain that our hearts crave for, long after we mount up a hill, bearing the music in our heart! And truly understand it's melody and the havoc it creates in our mind, only long after it is heard no more!😆

I completely agree with the point of trust. I feel it's more an honour to know you are trusted than be loved!
Sanskaar's and Swara's emotions of acknowledgement, denial , acceptance of their emotions and Love by large and the expressing followed by refusal to earning it back was just too realistic& true to the temperament of both the characters !👍🏼

The very scene of how Swara realizes the torment both have undergone because of their own prejudices & reasons, and that happening by reading a book. Deep. Afterall, one doesn't remain the same after opening the pages of a book. It clings even after you have closed it.

The part where Swara tries to win back Sanskaar and the descriptions of the glass and the flowers..so 👏. What a journey that was!🥳
Ahh! the line on the pillow wall getting dismantled tonight! 😳 A music to readers indeed!🥳

Thank you so much for invoking such deep emotions through your writing.😊

Reading your other works and will surely let u know about them. A little preoccupied for now.🤔

Till then keep writing more and many more. ⭐️👏

Edited by vaishnavi77 - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: samiya.059

sorry didn't chkd...well waiting for something very romantic on swason from ur pen...it would be a treat for people like me who are fan of ur works

Hi Samiya 😊 sure I will do best to post a very romantic OS/TS on SwaSan. I am traveling the coming week on work, so will do my best to update Nov 1st week.

Thanks again for reading and liking my work. 😊

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Gargi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#110

A beautiful piece of work if I ever saw one! !!!!

I'm not a regular member to the forum, to IF really, but during one of my exploring whims, as I call them, I came across one of your works , the elements's series to be precise ...I have been hooked up ever since. Your knack of delving into the characters is astounding, as is your ability to express their emotions so effortlessly. ...Sanskaar as a character was emoted with excellence and I commend you for that. ...Hats off to you lady!!! ( I guess? ?😛)

I'm not sure if I'll be able to comment on any of your upcoming works but I'll always read them eagerly. ...I'll appreciate them from the bottom of my heart and you should know that😊😊

Until next time, if there's ever one, Adios! !!

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