'Saudade'-- A SwaSan O.S

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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--Anna--

@--Anna--

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Posted: 9 years ago

Viji! 🤗

What a delight again! Absolutely breathtaking! 👏 👏

I will confess 'Saudade' was not a word I had recognised, but I LOVE it now. It sounds exotic and so poignant at the same time. A pleasure you suffer and ailment you enjoy - Wow! Beautiful! Thank you for introducing us all to this beautiful word. 😳

Obviously, I loved how you described Sanskaar distancing himself from Swara and I am totally on board with the idea that something similar needs to happen on the show. It is very important for Sanskaar to protect himself and make Swara realise what she feels for him truly. I loved how you described Swara's pain too. I would love to see more of it in the show as well. I enjoyed every bit of Sanskaar's possessiveness and Swara's regular wifely duties. Please creatives - show this instead of nonsense drama on the show. 🥱

Beautiful as usual! I am a huge fan. 👏😉

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...sandy...

@...sandy...

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

Viji 🤗 an awesome OS again.. Title is so awesome... 👏 I loved swara's feeling for sanskaar.. how she became a sanskaari wife for her sanskaar.. 😳 I loved her hiding of sanskaar's bag.. 😆

Red Sari I want her to see her in the show that way... 😳

Hanky of sanky not for wiping tears but for smudged lipstick... 😆 Awaah... 😳

Lovely dear.. Do write more... 😳

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

@-Ila-

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Posted: 9 years ago

Aww...i love ur writing... Absolutely love it...i am not much of a shipper but ur works made me fall in love with swasan...and this one, this one is awesome...ur writing has a certain elegance to it...

PS- carlos ruis zafon is one of my all time favourite authors...and i love the book 'shadow of the wind'

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi Viji!! I don't really have the right words up my sleeve to describe this wonderful piece of writing but I will try however with what I have.

Firstly I was thrilled in the first part at how Swara although lately came to realize her feelings for sanskar and the intensity of his love for her.

Then I was understanding where you described how he did not trust her anymore. The girl had that coming didn't she? she had pushed him a little too far that he was too afraid of the pain she might grant him, totally natural reaction from sanskar.

Then I was giddy, with fangirl kind of happiness at Swara's attempts to woo him. She's cute or what? That part was soo cute and beautiful. Then when she finally confessed again I almost cried. She's so repenting what she had done to him and so yearning for his love...

Of cause he saw her honesty then. The last paras were a treat, beautiful in a fiery way. It seemed all the emotions of a couple compressed in to one lengthy writing. Glad I could read something like this.

As usual you've done a marvelous job!!

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sonal

@SONAL30

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey viji

First of all sorry for the late reply

Asusual beautifully written update

Yaar u writes so beautifully...i must say u r a brilliant writer😃

Now coming to the story😆

Loved the way u have portrayed swara's journey...she was a carefree girl then she became lux's fiance n then sanskaar's wife

The way she renembered her past n differentiate between the two guys was so beautifully written

Her journey...from a confused n devastated girl to a loving n devotee wife👏

She had confessed her feelings but just because of her previous behaviour sanskaar rejected her proposal n became stone heartedpoor girl she was trying her best to rectify her mistakes but all went in vain just because of her previous actions...sanskaar was also right...she used him so much ki bande ka bharosa hi uth gya

But she chose to behave like a perfect wifey...she did all his work that too with so much love n devotion😳

N most important part of ur OS...The College Reunion...that was so nice

Swara was trying to win sanskaar's love but he misunderstood hern his frd was so cute he helped her a lot

Sanskaar felt jealous...ahaan😉 but he shouted at her n she felt bad😭she had made a collage of his smiling n happy moments...so cute😳

Finally that dhakkan realized his mistake n said sorry

The last part was☺️ especially the last line...naughty sanskaar😉

Loved it so much viji

Thanks for the pm dear🤗

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow what an amazing OS👏👏👏

I loved it a lot dr😳😳

And Carlos Luis Zafon is one of my favorite author,I have read the novel "the Shadow of the Wind " such an awesome novel,I am glad u have used instances from the Novel,awesome job dr👏

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Viji 🤗 You probably won't be that surprised reading this but- saudade has always been one of my favourite words for the connotations it carries- it always transported me to think of something exotic and compelling- almost like tones of Arabian Nights and smouldering passion if that makes sense?!

Coming to the OS- how have you managed to make it both poignant and still so funny, without losing any of the grip?! 👏👏👏.

I love how it flits from the pain of their relationship to how Swara makes it right, as in their situation it has to be her now who acts. I would love to see Sanskaar in the show distance himself (sadist I know) as nothing else will really bring the silly girl to her senses. I am unable to cut and paste sections but there are so many snippets that I love- e.g. the bit about far worse prisons than words and the section about being the person who breaks the heart of the one that loves you so much.

The Uttara and Swara "gang" was hilarious- 😆. Poor Sanskaar but also lucky Sanskaar 😆.

I have had some very bad news today and am trying desperately to focus on good things, and this certainly counts as one! Not allowed to say thanks but will say- lovely!

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

Viji,⭐️

The part where sanskaar started distancing himself from Swara, because he simply had reached the end of his tether...was really heartbreaking. You described it well...'like a bull being led for slaughter'

Then the part where Swara set about trying to get him to understand her love for him...that was funny and of course exciting to my SwaSanofied mind. It was also very close to canon.

The way Sanskaar slowly started giving in to all this newfound show of love from the significant other..and started getting all husband-y...was a treat.

And the finale...The part where both ends met...and a new beginning was born...was beautiful.

I hope to see this in the show...and I have a feeling it will be close to what we will see.😉 I got one word for you which I felt, when I read this. Its certainly not unheard of. Its bliss.

You said, you will be travelling for Nabami to Ekadashi...Safe journey, and enjoy yourself with your family...and yes, get good Wi-Fi.😃

Love,

Medha.