'Saudade'-- A SwaSan O.S - Page 12

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Viji...🤗 unresed on page 11...

Originally posted by: Gargi.swaron

A beautiful piece of work if I ever saw one! !!!!

I'm not a regular member to the forum, to IF really, but during one of my exploring whims, as I call them, I came across one of your works , the elements's series to be precise ...I have been hooked up ever since. Your knack of delving into the characters is astounding, as is your ability to express their emotions so effortlessly. ...Sanskaar as a character was emoted with excellence and I commend you for that. ...Hats off to you lady!!! ( I guess? ?😛)

I'm not sure if I'll be able to comment on any of your upcoming works but I'll always read them eagerly. ...I'll appreciate them from the bottom of my heart and you should know that😊😊

Until next time, if there's ever one, Adios! !!

Originally posted by: vaishnavi77

"Books don't change people, paragraphs do, sometimes even sentences!'
Bowled over, completely😃
The lines and quotes used in here are too good!

Firstly, too touched to see my name listed as one of the person to whom this beautiful piece has been dedicated. Back from a two days trip and unearthed this piece to find that!

Thank you so much, Viji, for being so generous and I truly have no words to thank you, not just for the dedication but for choosing a piece that is near to me- A piece full of human emotions🤗

The title is an amazing one.😎 Apt and appealing. Somehow, reading the title gave me an imagination of Arabs and the desert flavour. Maybe Saudi, finding an oasis in the desert and Saudade have an inkling 😛

But, as I read the description of the word, I only felt like thanking the language and you for introducing this important word! Somehow this reminded me of William Wordsworth's "Solitary Reaper!'

The line - " ...And she sings a melancholy strain" seems to just pop in my mind probably explaining how sometimes the very two extremely opposite words are the ones that define us and defy us of the barriers we build around ourselves! It is always the very ' apart' ones that becomes 'a part' of us.

Maybe it is the melancholy strain that our hearts crave for, long after we mount up a hill, bearing the music in our heart! And truly understand it's melody and the havoc it creates in our mind, only long after it is heard no more!😆

I completely agree with the point of trust. I feel it's more an honour to know you are trusted than be loved!
Sanskaar's and Swara's emotions of acknowledgement, denial , acceptance of their emotions and Love by large and the expressing followed by refusal to earning it back was just too realistic& true to the temperament of both the characters !👍🏼

The very scene of how Swara realizes the torment both have undergone because of their own prejudices & reasons, and that happening by reading a book. Deep. Afterall, one doesn't remain the same after opening the pages of a book. It clings even after you have closed it.

The part where Swara tries to win back Sanskaar and the descriptions of the glass and the flowers..so 👏. What a journey that was!🥳
Ahh! the line on the pillow wall getting dismantled tonight! 😳 A music to readers indeed!🥳

Thank you so much for invoking such deep emotions through your writing.😊

Reading your other works and will surely let u know about them. A little preoccupied for now.🤔

Till then keep writing more and many more. ⭐️👏

Originally posted by: Nithya.G

awesome update viji 👏

love it alot😳

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

I was supposed to unres this day before yesterday but things got in the way... Sorry for that
Now coming to your OS... Seriously Viji...Love you for writing such a beautiful OS. I really love your stories. Your writing style is so detailed and your words helds so much depth and power that anyone can feel the emotion the character is feeling. I am very choosy about what I read... but your writings I just cant stop reading... You and Shruti are one of the best writers I have read.😳Just keep sharing your words with us... 😳
Now coming to plot... I totally loved it... I really want to see Swara wooing Sanskaar... but you know in show the chances of happening it ..is so low. Loved Sanskaar stance here in your shot.. I totally understand where he was coming from. Then Swara determined to woo him back and in such a sweet way... loved it... 😳And last part... hehehehe... its naughty and ohhh..so romantic... Loved the naughty side of Sanskaar...
With loads of Love
Nityah... 😳😳

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome 👏

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi Viji!! I don't really have the right words up my sleeve to describe this wonderful piece of writing but I will try however with what I have.

Firstly I was thrilled in the first part at how Swara although lately came to realize her feelings for sanskar and the intensity of his love for her.

Then I was understanding where you described how he did not trust her anymore. The girl had that coming didn't she? she had pushed him a little too far that he was too afraid of the pain she might grant him, totally natural reaction from sanskar.

Then I was giddy, with fangirl kind of happiness at Swara's attempts to woo him. She's cute or what? That part was soo cute and beautiful. Then when she finally confessed again I almost cried. She's so repenting what she had done to him and so yearning for his love...

Of cause he saw her honesty then. The last paras were a treat, beautiful in a fiery way. It seemed all the emotions of a couple compressed in to one lengthy writing. Glad I could read something like this.

As usual you've done a marvelous job!!

Originally posted by: arohijsp

Lovely os. I've added "Shadow of the Wind" to my' want to read' list. Thanks!:)