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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Just loved it Anna. You brought out the pain and frustrated longing and rightful anger from Sanskaar so beautifully and I loved how you showed that much needed "tube light" moment for Swara where she realises what's she's doing to Sanskaar and how she needs to make amends too. It made me feel hopeful by the end which was really nice! Great job! X


Thank you so much Shruti! 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: dattu21

i want this type of scene between swasan...your os is so good ...keep it up...


Thank you so much. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Hey anna

Beautiful OS dear
Loved the way sanskaar confronted her n told her ki she is using him
Loved it
Do write more


Thank you so much Sonal! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

How much I wish to see something similar in the show.. *Sigh* Such beautiful portray of Sanskar's emotions.. Cvs please get inspired.. U might get a bag of lot more trps if u show something like this 😳

Keep Writing 😃


Hahaha! I wish too! Thank you so very much! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: anu91

Awesome os...

Loved it so much...


Thank you so much! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: kriti_sologar

COLOR=redo[B]ohhh my freaking gods...this is an awsuuum piece of writing...u have managed to capture d perfect emotions while keeping the story line as same as d show...i could only wish that they would have ahowed something similar in d show..it was just a pure bliss reading your os...it's a fact that sanskar is suffering too much and he def wont b able to sambhalo himself if swara leaves him again..but hats off to u dear...this is an exceptional piece of work..


Thank you so much! 😳

I also do not think that Sanskaar will be able to take care of himself if this is what continues to happen. Though Sanskaar is practical and knows how to bottle up his feelings very well, I wish he would maintain his distance from Swara.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: swa291

Amaizing

We all want sanskar to tell these things to swara .
Why cant she see sanskar and his pain .


Thank you so much 😊

I have no idea why Swara cannot see Sanskaar's pain. It is like she is blind to his pain.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: gayu6

Nice os anna. U clearly explained his feeling for her. He can't control his emotions anymore so his feeligs for her burst infront of her.Finally she realised he is the one who she needed at her good and bad times.


Thank you. I wish Sanskaar could tell his feelings to Swara, but that just does not seem to happen. 🥱

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