SwaSan OS : Outburst - Page 3

Just loved it Anna. You brought out the pain and frustrated longing and rightful anger from Sanskaar so beautifully and I loved how you showed that much needed "tube light" moment for Swara where she realises what's she's doing to Sanskaar and how she needs to make amends too. It made me feel hopeful by the end which was really nice! Great job! X

i want this type of scene between swasan...your os is so good ...keep it up...

Hey anna

How much I wish to see something similar in the show.. *Sigh* Such beautiful portray of Sanskar's emotions.. Cvs please get inspired.. U might get a bag of lot more trps if u show something like this 😳

Keep Writing 😃

Awesome os...

COLOR=redo[B]ohhh my freaking gods...this is an awsuuum piece of writing...u have managed to capture d perfect emotions while keeping the story line as same as d show...i could only wish that they would have ahowed something similar in d show..it was just a pure bliss reading your os...it's a fact that sanskar is suffering too much and he def wont b able to sambhalo himself if swara leaves him again..but hats off to u dear...this is an exceptional piece of work..

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Very powerfully written, Anna. Your OS reminded me of a favorite saying of mine, which Swara should think about: "The road to hell is paved with good intentions". Swara can only think of her maa--Baba and now behna---jeeja!! But what about the cost to the emotions of the person who has supported her through thick and thin?

Seriously, people with what I call the "martyr complex" are far more selfish than normal selfish people ---because they don't even realize who they are harming, in the quest for the "greater good".

Gahhh... I felt so desperately sorry for Sansku when I read this os. Hope this phase in the serial passes fast, and Swara falls BIG for Sanskaar, very soon!

Amaizing

Originally posted by: tasha001

Simply awesome love it...

Originally posted by: Shreeswathy

Awesome Anna..

But Swara Sanskar ke subject mein itna sensible hote toh, kitna acha hoga..